I would. I coulda. omg, it's so yellow and red. I wanted to put text, but I didn't know what to write. I suck at text. D:
This is probably the best thing I've seen from you. I love the red smudging, it's not as messy and blurry as the style you usually opt for, and you've used it in a way that allows for an interesting flow. What looks like C4Ds is a nice touch too -- now that you're starting to get basic composition and effects down, I suggest you focus on depth and lighting. I know that you struggle with text and with styles like this you kind of need it, but don't fret; not a lot of people are good with it, including myself.
