I really want to make this dream a reality. Please read

Earlier, I had a dream. It made me want to make this roleplay.
The gist of it is that less than about 20 people found some gems. Now people are chasing them for it, and in one scene, they managed to catch one. The one that owned the gem now chases after them, then falls after them over a cliff in to the forest.
Obviously, I'm going to change many things about this, but here's what I'm thinking:

The setting will be placed in the future where there's advanced tech, and the gems have just been recently discovered. Told by a prophecy a decade ago, the gems were able to give the wearer extraordinary power, so many people have been looking for it, whether it be for evil reasons or for good.
What they didn't know, or were told, was that the gems chose the wearer, not vice versa. There were 10 gems. 3 of them were much bigger than the others, and its unknown whether those 3 have much more unique properties than the other seven.
The ones who find the 10 are going to be you. When you, or your muses(characters)find the gem, at one point soon after they will receive a message that tells them to go somewhere for answers about the gems. The 10 will meet, and the messenger will reveal to them a secret organization that has been searching for the gems for years, not for selfish reasons, but because of another prophecy.
The second prophecy, aka The Apocalypse, tells of the world ending a decade after it was made, which is to say, the world will 'end' a decade after the first and second prophecy was created.
I'm still thinking about ideas for the cause of the end of the world, so even I don't know what the cause will be. But The Apocalypse foretold that the chosen 10 will be able to stop it, which took people to think that it would be the 10 gem finders.
Another organization will be wanting to steal the gems, for personal gain, and will send relentless attacks against the gem-bearers until they capture one. Even though the gems choose the wearer, it doesn't mean it can't be taken away by force

And that's what I'm thinking. But I think it needs a bit of improvement, and I want you guys to help me.
The gems powers are going to all have similar properties, mostly giving the wearer enhanced durability, strength, etc. but each gem has it's own powers, specifically elemental, but maybe it'll change, maybe not, it all depends on your opinions.
And the gems also have names, and they have a mind of their own, enabling them to telepathically speak with their owner, and anyone else. They each have different personalities.
That's all I'm thinking of right now, so I want the people that read this to make a quick comment. I just feel terrible with people viewing this and leaving without saying anything at all.

 

I have to say that the idea is very good, but a few parts of it are a bit confusing. Like how does the 2nd prophecy relate to the plot?

Otherwise, it all looks OK to me.

 

The second prophecy is pretty much the main problem in the roleplay. The chosen 10 are going to stop it.

 

I actually think this is pretty good. And if you need any help coming up with the properties/element for the gems I could help if you want.
Anyway the plot is good, but you just need to get it more organized and it will probably be easier to figure out the rest of the plot.
i could never come up with things like this.

 

Agreed. It looks like an interesting story and would make for a great rp. If you need any help, feel free to ask. I am always available! <3

 

Thanks guys. With help, this could perhaps be my first ongoing roleplay. But what could we add or take out? If its perfect the way it is, how do I make the big fancy ooc post for the rp thread?

 

yeah it is pretty good. it does need to be organized more but im not really one to talk:p. or is that the reason i know what im talking about? lol.