Traditional Art I need some real critique on this drawing...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by venster, Jul 18, 2007.

  1. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    I am finally posting up something that is nonchibi. O_O It's it ok? What do I need to fix (besides her hand)?


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    Oh and this is of my OC for KH, if you were wondering.
     
    venster, Jul 18, 2007
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  2. Anderson (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ You've lost the game.

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    It's better than paint. xD

    Anyways, her shoes could use more details. The whole drawing in itself looks a bit liney. Her eyes could be more defined, but I think you've got most of it down. Some shadowing would work as well to make the drawing less dull on her clothes and her weapon(?).
     
    Anderson, Jul 18, 2007
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  3. keyblade918 Moogle Assistant

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    its pretty good all it needs is some detail then it will look awesome
     
    keyblade918, Jul 26, 2007
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  4. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    The one thing that caught my attention was the anime eyes, once you have the eyes right, people wont care much about anything else. lol Nice work.
     
    Chad Thundercucc, Jul 26, 2007
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