I tried not smudging this time, and used the path tool. It was my first time, so it was really hard and I didn't know what to do. Edit: Moved text, darker: Darker image but visible text: No text:
I can't really make out the text and I think it is too bright over all. I really like what is going in the middle. I would like to see more of that and not all of the white.
Looks lovely, but it's very blurry. D: I think you were trying to go for a kind of dreamy feel, but it's hurting my eyes to focus enough on it to cnc. Feels like I'm watching a 3D movie without the glasses.
lol, sorry about all the shiny things. I love shiny things too much that I got carried away. Guess I should stop using white backgrounds. Then again, I'm horrible with black backgrounds too. Also, I can see the text perfectly fine at first, but it must have been just me and my computer screen. Thanks for tips. and edited.
I really like the moved text; darker version. I just realized the sillouette of the other person, which I find beautiful. Very nice.
I really think that version would look gorgeous without text. Sad to say, the text is a bright colour, the background is white... I really don't think there's a way you can make glowy text work in this situation... Other than that I really love the colours here and the negative space works well. The light source is a little bit overpowering, but overall it has some nice stuff going on. Good job. :D
