She's there for me every morning, the first thing I look that She never fails to make me smile, I know that for a fact Always warm and inviting, she puts the start to my day every time Sometimes she 's bit costly, but she's worth every dime If ever I lose her, I'd become a nervous wreck When I'm in a bad mood, she always knows how to keep me in check You're my honey, my toffee I love you so much, coffee <3
I love it, the unlikely love poem about man and drink xD It would have been better if you had put the picture in a spoiler so I would have spent most of the poem envisioning a woman but still, very funny xD It's almost the structure of a sonnet as well xD Good job.
Basically what I was going to say. The rhyming isn't forced and it'd keep you thinking that it's a girl or a child if you had the coffee in a spoiler. Nice work, Spike!
Lol its very very very good :p And I really did laugh out loud reading it,embarressing myself. Good work <3
I really like this poem. At first I thought you were talking about a female but when I looked at the pic it made me laugh. Good job :noworries:
I knew he was talking about coffee from the first line... Obviously men would cease to exist without it.
