Figured I start the story...before all my memories go away. Well, hope you like it, credits to the DN creators and credits to the people whom have started a dn story before me. This story came up to my head while I was working on my hit story KHCtE 2 and while drawing pictures. I found Death Note Chapter one The new season has sprouted now, Autumn. Down In New York, leaves were falling in it's place, the concrete ground. The colours were yellow, red and orange, the main ones. Children were laughing, oh how happy they were that they don't realize what's coming tp them in the future. " Renjiro! Oi, are you day dreaming again! You look like those people who have no mind!" yelled out a girl. Renjiro was his name. Renjiro has crimson hair, dark hazel eyes, a peach skin, he had asian eyes. He was half english and half asian. He wore a black coat with dark nazy blue jeans, his shoes were black with the logo "Nike" printed on them. He wore a scarf over his neck, he also wore a black thin hat. On his back was his school bag. The joy of learning. Renjiro looked down, snapped out. His eyes widened but then went smooth. "Sorry Suki, I guess I was thinking of something." Renjiro said, coming up with an excuse to hide his real expression. Suki smiled. " Well whatever!" she giggled, covering her left hand over her cute mouth. Suki wore a pink jacket, she wore white leggings and brown skirt, her boots were brown also. Her hair was in a pony-tail, the colour of her hair was dark brown, her eyes were hazel, she had the same eyes and skin as her big brother Renjiro. Behind her back, dangled a brown bag, her school bag. " We better hurry Suki before be both get a lecture for being late again." he glared at Suki for a second and then smirked at her, with his cheeks in a light pink tone. " As again, whatever bro!" she moaned. ~ Home~ Renjiro and Suki entered their home. Inside their home was nice and warm, there was a small carpet layed across the entrance, there were brown chocolate hooks, up ahead was a hall way, north was the kitchen, west was the closet room and east was the way to the the living room. On the side nearby the door were the stairs. The second floor was just above them two. "Don't forget to take off your shoes." Renjiro reminded her little sister Suki. Suki pouted, she wasn't in the mood for taking her shoes off, lazy girl. Renjiro himself had already taken off his shoes, he placed his coat on the brown chocolate hook, aslong with his scarf and hat. " If I take off my shoes... do I get a snack?" Suki innocently smiled. Renjiro turned around , facing her sister. He nodded in a response to the answer, "yes". Renjiro took his school bag off his bag, and then held it in his left hand. " Mom and dad are abit late, so I'll be up in my room. Make sure to check whom it is at the window and slowly make a peek through the curtains to see who is at the door." Renjiro ordered calmly, just to let Suki know what to do. Suki nodded and saluted. ~ Renjiro's BedRoom~ The room was dark, the only light that showned was his lamp that was on. Renjiro walked over and threw himself on his bed, landing on his back, the matress moved up and down as an echo. He sighed and turned his head over to his school bag. " Is it right to check out the Note book?" Renjiro asked himself, with a little worried face. Renjiro reached his hand in his school bag, digging for something. A notebook. With Renjiro's hand releasing out his school bag, there it was. A black notebook, about 15 centimetres or more, on the cover had the words printed " Death Note" " Death Note..." End of chapter one.
Whoa, another story from Mexony :3 I <3 Death Note, good first chapter, though it could be longer, I think it's fine as it is. Keep it up.
Lol Deathnote. Interesting path you are taking Mex, it's a bit of a darker and more demonic story. I'm interested in seeing how you play this out...and who will be keeping the new Kira in check.
Thanks you two. I should really start the new chapter o_O. I've been meaning to type a new one two months ago , but I have no idea to what happened... I found Death Note Chapter 2 Renjiro looked at the Death Note, the one he held in his hand. He didn't understand it much but he knows that it means danger. Or maybe not. It could be a book that's just tricking others, probably trying to get them scared of the stupid note book. " This means nothing." Renjiro said, examining the book carefully. There wasn't anything interesting. No name, no interest, nothing. Renjiro sighed and opened the notebook. The very first page was a "How to Use" rule. After that were pages with lines running across. It seems like an ordinary notebook, heck, I bet the people who saw me picked up the notebook must've thought I'd taken the joke, he thought. But it could be real to others. Suddenly, the door knocked. Renjiro gasped and closed the note book, then stuffed it in his school bag. He then took a deep breath, who ever would be knocking the door could be someone important. Renjiro looked at his school bag and snatched it away from the edge of the bed, putting it behind his back. " Who's knocking," he asked. Renjiro needed to know the answer, who knows... that person might want something or just came to visit. " Well, I'm the only one in here so it must be someone...say...Suki?" There was a giggling voice on the other side of the door. Renjiro gave out a sigh of relief. He closed his eyes and sucked in some air. He need to calm down. To stop thinking about "Death Note" , and look to the timing now. It's over, now's the time to focus on something else. "Sure, come on in, Suki." he calmly said. The door knob twisted, then a swing. The door swung open, revealing Renjiro's little sister. She gave an innocent smile and skipped over towards her brother. " Hey!" Suki jumped onto her bed, the matress shook. Renjiro felt a panic now. What if Suki looked behind her brothers back and notice his school bag. " Anyways, I was wondering if you could take me to my friends house." " Do I have to?" "Yes! I called mom a few minutes ago and she said it was fine." " You didn't call your friend?" "I already did! Gosh, you don't have to be a pain , Renjiro!" " Sorry, I'm just looking after you." Suki smiled, her eyes going up, squished together. She moved towards her brother and wrapped her arms around his neck. Hugging him. What a moment. Renjiro didn't move but wait for Suki's joy to be over. After, she let go and leaped off her brothers bed. She waved and began to run down the hallway, leaving the doorway open. Renjiro cracked up a tiny smile. He was glad that Suki didn't see the Death Note. Otherwise, he'll be in a huge dilemma. * * * Renjiro had brought his school bag with him to go drop off his little sister. " Why're you carrying your school bag?" Suki looked up to her brother while they were both walking. Renjiro tick-tocked his head side to side. " I'm carrying it for no reason. When I drop you off I might go buy myself a soda-" "And you need a bag?" she cocked her head. It made no sense. Renjiro's plan was stupid. " Well yeah, I might buy some more stuff or-" "Save it, I already know." " What?" Renjiro felt a heat up go in his body. It was making him uncomfortable.What could she know? " You're hiding your Death Note." " What!? How do you know it was a Death Note?" " Easy, when I hugged you I saw that book slipping out." " And you didn't even bother saying anything?" "What? It was a good moment. My big brother accepting my jobs!" Renjiro stopped and pulled Suki's arm back. Suki squeeled for a short time. She didn't realize her brother pulling her back. Renjiro frowned and looked in Suki's eyes. " Tell no one." he coldly said. He let go of Suki and gave her a dirty look. Suki almost looked terrified. Renjiro began to walk ahead. "Come on-" "Brother!" Suki said, her hands clutched. " What!?" he turned around and saw Suki standing there. Her legs shaking. " Why're you so mad? Why? Is it so wrong to look at the Death Note?" " Yes! It means much to me! Why the hell would you do that?" " But I never opened it!" " Yeah because-" " It's your diary, I know. Just because you carved Death Note on it, I know it's your personal diary." A crack on the step. Renjiro stared at her. Suki had thought it was his diary. Pathetic. Renjiro spazzing out on her sister, when she thought it was something else. Very clever. " Sorry, I thought you-" "Trust me brother, I would never touch your things. Only if I asked permission." " Well...I'm glad you told me. I thought you would tell mom or something-" " I wouldn't. It's your diary! Afterall, it's yours to keep. Parents don't need to know." "Thanks-" "Yeah, yeah, whatever! Take me to my friends place!" "Roger that...crackspine." he mumbled under his breath. * * * Renjiro was walking back home. After he had dropped off her sister, he stopped by the Public Library. There he sat in the reading corner. Renjiro slipped the Death Note out on his lap and looked around. No cameras, no one looking at him. Good. " Alright Death Note, I need to see what you do. Let us just pretend that it's a Science experiment. He flipped it open and grabbed out his pencil. He looked around and saw the librarian stacking some books on the shelves. Now was his time. He put his pencil on the paper, above the first line, beside the fainted margin that he had imagined. " S-a-V-il- done." Renjiro placed his pencil down and watched the librarian stack her books. She noticed Renjiro and gave him a warm smile and a short wave. Renjiro waved back and pretend to focus on the notebook. He looked at her carefully. A minute has passed and a few seconds. Renjiro blew out some air, his hand under his chin with his elbow rested on the notebook. Suddenly there was a choking voice. She screamed out "HELP" at the beginning. Renjiro jumped up and saw the librarian fall to the ground . "Uagh!" The librarian was struggling, her body was twitching. Her hands in a twisted form. Saliva dripping out. Renjiro gasped, eyes wide open. " No, no , no, no, NO!" Renjiro grabbed his pencil and flipped it the other way quickly. The pink eraser touching the written letters. He moved his hand back and forth, trying to erase her name. But it was to late. The librarian stopped struggling. Renjiro dropped his jaw. He was in shock. His body was shaking, he felt a squirmish feeling in his stomach. He felt bad. " I-I..." he froze. His body paralyzed. Renjiro didn't know what to do, he was in terrible shock. He didn't think well enough. " I...murdered her." End of chapter 2.
