I really don't know if drawing is allowed here instead of computer graphics and I drew a lot of drawing during my school time so I dunno but if you close this, that's fine by me. Here are my drawings: http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07100.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07099.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07098.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07095.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07094.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07091.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07090.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07093.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07065-1.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07064.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07062.jpg http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc148/Movie_Guy/DSC07096.jpg Comment on how well I did plz.
Okay, I know I'm going to regret this, but if you want the truth, I think for a 14 year old, you could have done A LOT better.
Your art isn't that bad :D I just think that you need to study the basics of art: elements and properties. The shading is quite off. Try using different pencils, they do help, some are thicker and darker, and some are harder, making them very light. (They should say like "H" or "B") Some of the pictures are smudged, and trust me, stay away from that, usually it just make it look very messy. I suggest you work on your proportions. A lot of the art work is lopsided. Try measuring out the space you need and stay in that limit. Look at other anime. Take some pointers from them so you can copy some eyes or noses or etc. They help :D And when your colouring in, don't colour all of it, just some parts, with the dark pencil it'll look better if you keep some areas un-coloured and some just shaded. With really nice effects, like multiple lines from close together to very wide apart. (This is called hatching). Here are some sites to help you: http://www.portrait-artist.org/basics/techniques.html http://www.bluemoonwebdesign.com/art-lessons.asp Hopefully this helps ^^ Good Luck.
