I don´t understand

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    I just wanted to be happy
    But everything was taken from me
    I just now want to cry
    I feel my tears falling down

    I can feel my agony, why I can´t simple die?
    I can feel my sorrow, my cry
    I can feel only my tears
    I want to end this agony

    I can feel myself die
    I can feel the past running thought my mind
    I can feel that pain
    That I had to stake in the past

    I just want to cry now
    I can feel like I wanted to go to the oblivion
    Why I didn´t kill me before?
    I have to suffer this pain now

    This is the end for me
    And I didn´t deserve this
    I will die soon
    But I don´t want to

    I am so confused, I am dying?
    I don´t understand what´s happening to me
    This is my punishment?
    What I did?

    I feel my heart quivering
    My eyes closing
    As my end comes
    What I did, is this my fault?
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    I am depressed and I don´t know why, I am so confused in this moment >.<
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Nice poem...don't forget I'm always there for you, Chaser. :) *hugs*
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    *Hugs back* Thanks, and writing this actually maded me feel a little better :).
     
  4. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    If writing these poems makes you feel better than BY GOD write them every single day.

    I hope you don't have to though becuase I don't want you to be sad.

    Good Job.

    XD

     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks :3, and I am way too better.
     
  6. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    I'm glad they do! :) Keep on writing more if it helps! :glomp:
     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Okay, thanks too :3 :glomp:
     
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