Seems like you're improving. I see you tried to do some nice things there. Yet, still I'll CnC, with all honesty. I don't really enjoy the lack of blending here. In some tags not blending at all is nice, but here the stock needed more blending, other than similar coloring, and a shadow effect behind her. I like the use of C4D to create flow. It's really basic, but it works nicely. The text is...well, I'd go with the first one in regards to that, since I like the positioning, but it's still not great. Overall, we can see that you tried many things with the text, and that's actually good. Overall, you should keep at it, since it seems you're really trying at this.
