This is a very nice tag dude. The splatters work very well, but some of the splatters need more depth. It's not fitting well. You see the whole area with blur and see the splatter perfectly sharp...it kinda' ruins it. But the color collaboration looks good. And the text isn't bad. The last line I can't read (does it say "once"?) but otherwise very nice. What I would do is though make some fx coming from the girl =\
o.O her names susan eheh i like it a lot - but i cant really critise coz i dont really understand them
