Video //I Come Alive//

Discussion in 'Production Studio' started by Knightshade, May 20, 2012.

  1. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Some good stuff going on here.

    However, there were a couple of things that I really took issue with:
    - The first five seconds were really distracting. I'm presuming you were going for the whole dream approach but the awkward zoom in/pan out and a less than flattering red colour with blurring didn't really sell your video.
    - I thought the Keyblade mask at 0:09 was unnecessary.
    - Some decent masking throughout the video. I think my favourite one was at 0:35 with the manga.
    - The fast cuts at 0:40, showing the conception of Roxas, was the most outstanding moment in the video
    - Were you trying to portray Roxas was angry at the 0:48 mark with the red? It just looked...horrible to be honest.
    - You can crop, zoom in/zoom out and mask. But you didn't get rid of the subtitles? Try to keep them out of future vidoes as they can be very distracting.

    Good effort though. You should continue to make more.