I Can Wait

I can wait

The sun is setting
On my last day
The thoughts I have
Will fade away

No fun where I’m going
No smiles to wear
This prison I’m going to
No one cares

In the world of learning
Authority strikes
B*tches strike too
Their words of spikes

For my holiday to end
I can wait
For my inability to find friends
I can wait

For the rumours circling me
I can wait
For the struggle to be free
I can wait

For the numbing pains in my head
I can wait
For my life to end

I can wait

so, what do you think???

 

I love it Dear
It rhymes Perfectly ^^
Great Job :]
:3​

 

Wow, that's very good. It rhymed very well. Good job. Keep it up. ​

 

Even though it was meant to be a dark poem, it felt quite lighthearted to me, not sure if you were aiming for that xD
It was easy to read because it rhymed ~

I know usually repitition is a plus, but you used "I can wait" so much it kind of got annoying towards the end D:

However, it was a good poem <3