You critiqued mine, it'd be right if I do it back. Too much clutter. Style is pretty, but this render is a hard thing to work with. The dissolving of the sword...shouldn't be there at all tbh. Or you should dissove more so it looks like it's dissolving. I don't like the left pixels off dissolves. Right side is seczky. Text needs work. No text at all would be good. Lighting near the text is hott. Sharpen and blur. And maybe even some topaz. Otherwise, nice ^^ I like.
Good to know you used the stock I gave you :'D. Anyways, liking this one, only complain is that I don´t like what you did to the quality of her face, too it could more FG, like some pentooling around her sword, and the text it´s quite blurry in consideration with the stock. Too the part you smudged of her sword kinda irks me =\. Liking the BG. Good job, btw ;o.
Let's see. I love it! You could although enlarge her face a bit more and nice sword dissolving style there. I like it a lot. Then I can read "heaven sent" but I can't read what's underneath. Try making the quality a bit better. Overall, you did a good job.
Damn, this stock got really popular after giving it to Chaser. But, thankfully, no one has really screwed it up. I like the background and the flow of how the colors matched the original picture, but what's bugged me in that big hole on the girl's sleeve. And the text somehow feels like it shouldn't be there. But oh well, nonetheless, I have no problems with it, and you did a wonderful job. <3
