>>> I lived before life was ever created And died before death was an option And yet sin follows my every step my every shadow. I long to cry out to some one or something Yet no one will listen and nothing is there to hear the cries. But I know that some one is out there to save me Save me from this nightmarish road I’m on I’m driving myself towards something worse than death. But to hear the metronome ticking away again Would be my life’s pleasure But I can never return to that state of mind. Since life has cheated me of that contentment Now, breathing just comes as a second nature And I’ve never blushed of embarrassment Since this life has made me one-hundred percent graceful. But sometimes, I wish that I'd trip or something that could prove I was human Though I knew that was impossible. I knew I would never see my family again For I had outlived them, in a race with time. I am what I most feared at the time of a child I have finally come back with reality at my fingertips I am a Vampire. <<< This was my... Second poem that I've written on free-will. The other poems I've posted were created after this one. ButI found this deep within my files. This one, I might not have correct puntuation... Again. So, CnC, just please, NOT a whole lot of crud about punctuation, 'cause I know.
Wow, very nice. I could see lots of potential in this and some of your other writing too. Just keep going.
