Digital Art I am a machine

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Doukuro, Nov 28, 2012.

  1. Doukuro Chaser

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    So I still try graphics every now and then but I can't say it's my thing though I would like to improve. And I like this one so feedback on it would be nice.​
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  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Well . . . a couple things I notice. The orb of light in the right (in her left hand) looks a little plain, like it's just a white coat. Perhaps try adding some form of texture maybe.

    The text in the background also comes to my mind. I like how the letters just sort of meld with the background but the last letter is cut off. It's not always a problem, in fact it might even make it look cooler. Just pointing it out.

    That's all I can see here though. Other than those, and even with those, it's a good graphic. It's always fun to be able to make your own stuff ^.^
     
  3. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    Throw on an awesome texture or something over that flare effect and ya got a mighty fine piece right there.
    Also the text is great and all but it looks like you're trying too hard to hide it.

    Those are my only gripes.
     
  4. Doukuro Chaser

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    Now the lack of texture is mentioned I see it. So yeah, thank you for pointing it out. And glad it is like otherwise c:

    Sadly I didn't save the psd file so I can't go back and make any edits so it's stuck as is.