I wrote this in class when we did a topic on homeless people, it's one of my favourite poems of my own work and I'd like to hear what you guys think (Be as critical as you like ^_^) "Homeless man out on his own Homeless man sleeping on stone Homeless man has lost his life Homeless man with bloody knife Homeless man smiling and free Homeless man, family and key Homeless man with job and money Homeless man eating sugar and honey Homeless man's life was stressed Homeless man, fights, violence and all the rest Homeless man finds an escape Homeless man's addiction starts to take shape Homeless man on the street Homeless man has lost his beat Homeless man cannot be found Homeless man finds a new crowd Homeless man looks back in hate Homeless man's life that sealed his fate Homeless man misses it so Homeless man who fell loose from the flow Homeless man is pained Homeless man's addiction leaves him strained Homeless man is finding it hard Homeless man got himself barred Homeless man has had enough Homeless man doesn't like sleeping in the rough Homeless mans new escape Homeless man, don't worry, it's just a scrape Homeless man has knife in heart Homeless man's time to depart Homeless man's final beat will cease Homeless man finally found some peace."
