Hold those who are close to...

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Last of the Organization, Jul 25, 2008.

  1. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hold those who are close to you,
    never letting go,
    no matter what happens,
    they and you are together that you know.

    When you seem lost,
    and don't know what to do,
    just remember that in your heart and mind,
    there are people who are there for you.

    Some may be closer than others,
    some you call a just a plain friend,
    some could be just really good or close friends,
    others could be sisters or brothers.

    But you know you have those special few,
    who really hold a special place in your heart,
    give you happiness and joy,
    no matter how far apart.

    Whether they are around you,
    have pictures on your wall,
    can't really see them,
    can't even give them a call .

    Still you can never forget them,
    no matter what befalls you,
    forever they have made their mark,
    nothing less than a gem.

    So when you are feeling lonely,
    lost something, someone, or are just plain hurt,
    there are people who care about you,
    you just have to stay alert.
     
  2. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Very good poem, Last... I can see alot of emotion and feeling behind it... To say the truth, I actually lost the rythm for a bit in the third stanza because it didn't rhyme like the rest of the poem, but I loved it... Great job. ^^
     
  3. Firekeyblade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Nice.....those close to me huh?.....