hold me

Hold me so tight
Hold me through the night
Wipe away my tears
Hold me close and rid my fears​

I wanna be near you
I hope you feel this way too
In the middle of my dreams I think
Without you I would sink​

No matter what you say
No matter what you do
You will always be the one
I will always love you

I will always love you

I know we'll be together
For now and forever
Please don't let me go
Fall with me into the snow​

 

Comments? Plz?

 

I like it, alot actually... I could picture this being a part of a song or something, good job ^^

 

Thank you, I actually wrote it as a duet song

 

I kinda imagined the red text to be a girl, the blue to be a guy and purple to be both, right? ^_^ it is very good

 

i like it,it is a very good song.keep it up

 

yes, that's right

 

Very nice.I liked it.I don't know why but when I read hold me I thought of Simple and Clean haha I guess because the song has hold me in it.Anyways back on topic.I liked it.Keep it up.

 

Wow...I actually sung it in my head,its like a chorus in a disney movie.Nice job!

 

Thanks, I consider this some of my best work