A basic and simple sketch I made. I was listening to Viva la Vida [by Coldplay], and I literally let my hand do all the work, letting it do what it did best... SKETCH. I was not paying attention and neither did I know what I was sketching until the very end, and VOILĂ€! Tools: Pencil Time: 5 minutes It's done on lined paper, BLASPHEMY, I know.
ZOMG. This actually took you five minutes o.O. I wish I had your skills. Overall, I can't say much, you probably can pick out a bunch of mistakes ^^;, yet I have nothing to say on the side angle. Is very neat, and really wonderful. For the other, I kind of notice she doesn't have arms D:. I guess that wouldn't matter with the picture though, but for some reason, also, when I stare at her laying down, I see that her head is looking like she's trying to lift it up or forward, or her body. Maybe is just me, or just gazing too hard at it xD. You also could've done more with the dress, but for five minutes, is actually quite nice. Nice work :D. For a simple lined paper sketch. All is there to say is that is not bad. And this, is from a non-arists point of view. Wish I was one, then maybe I could give you a more thorough pwnage :P.
Daaaaang. You draw nicely good! The details are great and I guess you could shade it a bit and more and all but the rest is perfect. Overall, you did a good job!