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This was something that started out from some drama around a friend and spawned from there. Its kinda choppy, but I like it like that. She liked it, however, feedback is always appriciated.

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Care,
was it ever even there for her?

Apologies fly through the air.
Could they be sincere?

Doubts cloud the thoughts
while the tears drown her eyes.

The sadness breaks them both down,
masks finally being lifted.

Truth,
finally being revealed.

The light being shown
on the dark secret.

And yet,
she'd rather crawl into the dark,

become a secret herself,
and hide away forever

 

tis all good.

except that, its kinda sad that inspiration comes from such an uncomfortable situation.

 

I agree. It's sad at some stuations.

 

Thanks. The friend situation was actually really sad and depressed me a little, and this is what came from it.

But thanks for the feedback =D