Digital Art Hermetica

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Chevalier, Apr 25, 2010.

  1. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Look towards me, don't look back.
    Don't you see that all will be repeated
    in this Hermetic state?


    V2
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    V3
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    I like both styles, but my preferred is V2, yet they both bring a different atmosphere. I have other tags made, but since the place is pretty quiet, I didn't want to post it all, but rather wait a period in between

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  2. Misty gimme kiss

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    I like this one a lot. :] The focal is amazing. The concept of the light in V1 I prefer, because I feel that with some burn tool V2 could be incredible. The yellow in V1 is just too overwhelming; I think I know what you were going for but it's not quite there. I'm not sure about the disjointed feeling between the right and the left, either -- I think making the white be more of red/orange would be better. Text is nice but I'd like it to be a bit more noticeable.

    Overall, if you get some dodging/burning in here this could be an incredible tag.
     
  3. motitas Moogle Assistant

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    really like it. I think you should lower the opacity on that yellow layer you added to V2. You should also make the text readable, or just not have it at all as it should be important, not just some distraction from the art. I like the vividness of V3 and thats something we dont observe on V2.

    I can now see what you wanted to do in V2 but It has to look more like glow instead of transparent paper. I dont know what proggy your using so I really cant tell you how :(

    Anyway really nice overall :D
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Well, I do have the .PSD, still without tampering the lighting and all. Now that I look at it, it is a bit too yellow-ish. But, I do suck at lighting and what not. I don't really have much idea about what to do. I don't really feel like continuing this tag, either.

    I did try the dodge/blur thing, but I kept messing it up. I might fix it tomorrow. After all, this was just practice.