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Which one?

  1. A boy and his pup

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  2. How to save a life

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  3. Wishmaking

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  4. Kira: God of Justice?

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  1. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    Okay...

    for school i need to write something over thanksgiving break (all next week). Anyway, it has to be an essay or a short story. I've had so many ideas, i can't decide. So can you help me. (btw, it's for a contest that a bunch of people in my school district do to get published in a local district book)

    A boy and his pup
    A story of a boy who gets a dog when he is 10 years old.

    How to save a life
    Translating the famous song into a short story of a boy whose mom died.

    Wish making
    A short bio on my trip to Orlando, Florida two years ago

    Kira: God of Justice?
    An essay analyzing is it alright to kill people.

    so, which sounds better?
     
  2. Radiowave ITSA PIIINCH

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    A boy and his pup seems to generic. It doesn't seem unique enough. Anyone can write about getting a puppy.

    How to save a life interesting. It would pretty cool to see a song tie into a short story, especially a song like HtSaL

    Wishmaking another generic one. Unless something insane happened at Florida, people might not give that much attention to it.

    Kira gonna raise some eyebrows. Plus it would be really bad explaining DN in a story.
     
  3. Juicy Chaser

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    Either How to Save a Life or Kira: God of Justice.The other two just sound naff, no offense xD
     
  4. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    oh no, it's okay. they were just ideas. The reason why i chose the title Kira:God of Justice? is to show a commonly asked question i asked myself, is it okay to kill criminals (that's why i put a "?" at the end of the title).
     
  5. The Fuk? Dead

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    The God of justice would be the most attention grabbing, I'd go with that
     
  6. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Write 'bout a wee boy that travels weildin' a key-like blade alongside with a dog n' a duck with no pants.
     
  7. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    thats...

    thats...

    genius!
     
  8. 007 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    how to save a life
    (but it would be better if you can make up who died or decide in your story if they are dying or if they are already dead)
     
  9. The Fuk? Dead

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    that's blasphemy
     
  10. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Your face is blasphemy!
     
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    I'd say How to Save A Life.It would be interesting to have a song be put into a story.And the idea does sound quite interesting.
     
  12. jafar custom title

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    Write a romance novel, with a sex scene and a plot-twist DURING THE SEX.
     
  13. The Fuk? Dead

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  14. jojoj13 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Kira: God of Justice? seems kind of nice.

    How to save a life is okay.

    Wish Making looks like it's not interesting.

    A boy and his pup's story is kind of old, a bit used up a lot from some kid books.

    ._.

     
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