I've come up with a terrible crossover fanfic idea. It's called, "Holden has a Death Note" and details Holden Caulfield using a Death Note to rid the world of phonies. "This world is lousy, it really is. Sometimes I really think it would be for the better if a bunch of people just died, you know? People like that Ackley who are all phony and all, you know? That's what I was thinking on my way out of old Pencey Prep, when out of nowhere a weird black book fell clear out of the sky! I'm not kidding. I wanted to know what it was so I picked it up and flipped the pages a little..." It would probably go on like that for a chapter or six.
Oh, good lord, not sure if this is better or worse. @__@ "You're not a time traveller or a Doctor; you're a phony!" "What?"
I'd have to agree with tale_wind about this one. First off, you should always generalize your ideas on a seperate piece of paper before publishing the story on the net. You should also check for mistakes since that seems to tend a lot. [Me for example]