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  1. KeybladeSpirit [ENvTuber] [pngTuber]

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    I've come up with a terrible crossover fanfic idea. It's called, "Holden has a Death Note" and details Holden Caulfield using a Death Note to rid the world of phonies.

    "This world is lousy, it really is. Sometimes I really think it would be for the better if a bunch of people just died, you know? People like that Ackley who are all phony and all, you know? That's what I was thinking on my way out of old Pencey Prep, when out of nowhere a weird black book fell clear out of the sky! I'm not kidding. I wanted to know what it was so I picked it up and flipped the pages a little..."

    It would probably go on like that for a chapter or six.
     
  2. Loxare Hollow Bastion Committee

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    No one appears to be helping you.

    Does that mean it's being written?
     
  3. KeybladeSpirit [ENvTuber] [pngTuber]

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    Nah, I moved on to a Catcher in the Rye/Doctor Who crossover.
     
  4. . : tale_wind Ice to see you!

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    Oh, good lord, not sure if this is better or worse. @__@

    "You're not a time traveller or a Doctor; you're a phony!"

    "What?"
     
  5. Loriah Banned

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    I'd have to agree with tale_wind about this one. First off, you should always generalize your ideas on a seperate piece of paper before publishing the story on the net. You should also check for mistakes since that seems to tend a lot. [Me for example]
     
  6. What? 『 music is freedom 』

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    So a pure cut-and-dry Death Note fanfiction.
    Good luck, sir.