Help with my Japanese?

Discussion in 'Discussion' started by Solid Snake, Dec 13, 2008.

  1. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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    I'm having a bit of trouble grasping the verbs I should use to show past and present tense, along with many other errors...

    Could you check my writing?

    子供の生命は楽しむ。
    Children enjoy life.

    ゲームが失った彼。
    He lost the game.

    彼女は貝殻販売する。
    She sells seashells
     
  2. Johnny Bravo Chaser

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    this is what i got:

    children enjoy life:
    エンジョイ 人生ゲ

    He lost the game:
    ヒューマンエンジニアリング ロスト

    She sells seashells:
    I couldnt figure it out... sorry...
     
  3. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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    Thanks for trying but the first one(You said) says "Energy Efficiency enjoy life". The second one says "Human engineering Lost".

    Or at least I think so...I'm self taught so go easy on me if I'm wrong.
     
  4. Johnny Bravo Chaser

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    yea, I havent spoken or written Japanese in like 2 years.... the fact I could even remember that suprizes me... anywayz, I took a class about a year or two ago all about japanese... I might be wrong, maybe I need to brush up....
     
  5. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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    Ah! Thanks for your efforts!
     
  6. Zexion King's Apprentice

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    dang it..
    i can't understands these....
     
  7. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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    Bump...

    Any expert japanese speakers out there?