Ok guys i need your help. I'm planning to write a story based on kingdom hearts but in different way like its gonna be about a girl (haven't came with a name yet) who has the ability to sing for peace and potection (i know sounds weird but bare with me on this) Org.XIII finds her on Destiny Island (Just pretend Sora and Riku never knew kairi)while shes watching Sora and Riku play fighting. Sora and Riku don't notice shes gone until a couple of minutes later. Sora and Riku search everywhere but couldn't find her. Thats all I have so far but I'll keep you guys posted. All I want to know is Does this sound like a good story? Yes or No and please say why. You can also add some stuff in if you like. Now, Take it away:) P.S When i come up with the first chapter,I'll post it to see what you guys think.
It does sound like a good story.We just have to see the first chapter.When you do post the first chapter,we'll be able to give you any advice we can give you.The singing for protection and peace thing sounds interesting.I'd love to read you're story.Just remember that if you need help with a story or you need CnC,other writer's are here to help you.
When i get the first chapter done, i'll post it. the thing is that, i can't think a name for the main character. I can up with a name for her which is Misha. Her ability to sing is from another game i played called Ar Tonelico and ever since I played the game I loved the ability so I also thought it was i good idea. I also haven't came up with a name for the story but I think of more for the story and post it, maybe i'll get some ideas. Maybe I'll come up with a name for the story lol
Anything that you made, I have to like. Can't wait to see what you can do in your story. Personally, I think the plot line would be amazing, but that's just my opinion.
Thanks. I've been putting alot of time in this story to make interesting. I just had to put Org.XIII in because I needed group villains in the story and the Org. was the only thing i could think of and as I said before, they take the girl away from Destiny Islands.
Wow BBS13 I love your story line.I can't wait to see the first chapter. The story sounds very interesting.
Well here is some info I made for the main character so you guys can understand her more. Sakura is the main character of this story. She shy and quit but very intellgant. Sakura was gifted a special ability when she was just a little girl to keep darkness out of the worlds. Sakura does remember her childhood which she feels terrable about. Sakura's Past It was Sakura's 10th birthday and it wasn't how she dreamed it. Sakura's mother, Tastiella, was working in the kitchen with the other workers. Sakura was very excited for her birthday. As the guest arrived at there home, a battle a stuck out. Sakura was frighted. As she was in search for her mother, she found her mother dead. Sakura ran in fear away from her home. Sakura reach the shore of the beach. A tall man in a long black, hit her over the head which made her unconscious. The man ran off into a dark portal and she never saw him. As for Sakura, she floated all across sea but was found on Destiny Island but she calls it her new home.
Sounds really interesting... Ya, you should totally make a story out of it, I'm sure it'll be great!!
