just a little story that I just made up....not too orginal at first IntroThis is the beginning of our world. Two sisters landed on a world that was lifeless. They wanted to make a place to live together for the rest of their lives. They simply wished life on that world and it happened. Trees grew out of the ground. Rivers and lakes made their home there. The world was now the most beautiful place in the universe and a paradise. The sisters soon grew lonely; the animals could not talk back to them. So they created human like beings. The beings loved the sisters and they worshiped them. The beings needed homes to live so they created a city. A city of beauty and was talked about throughout the universe as the best city ever made. Their technology quickly grew and they were able to leave the world on ships at any time they pleased, not that anyone wanted to leave. One of the sisters was named Desire; she was beautiful as a rose and all of the men wanted to be named her lover. Desire’s sister was named Envy, named that because she envied everything, even her sister. She grew jealous of her sister and that jealously turned into hate. She to had people who would do anything for her and not her sister. She had a young man get close to her sister. Desire fell in love with the man without knowing that he was plotting to kill her. She could read minds and hearts but thanks to her sister’s spell the young men was protected by Desire’s power. One night he was given a sword by Envy, which was specially made to kill her sister. He went into her room in her and her sister’s castle and pierced the sword through her heart and she died. Envy told the kingdom that someone had broken in and killed her beloved sister and everyone mourned. The man who killed her thought that he would became king but Envy just laughed when he asked and threw him into jail and told everyone that he had killed Desire. He was shocked by this and yelled out the she told him to. Envy, of course, denied having anything to do with her sister’s death and even started to cry saying how could he say such a thing! She had him put to death within the same day. A week later she was talking to the people of her kingdom when her sister appeared as an angel. She told the people what really happened for she found out everything by the man who had killed her, who was now in heaven. She had became leader of Heaven, or now known as Mother to some or just plain God, and said that her if her sister wanted to lead so much, she shall lead Hell. She banished Envy to Hell to rule it all of eternity. Before she left she said this: “I will come back!” and she was gone. Now, a thousand years later, people have forgotten about the sisters and the lost city of Envy and Desire. Strange things are happening now. People are going missing. My sister disappeared last week. Whole cities are even being wiped out and became ghosts towns. Strange beings came to this world and killed many. We call them Demons. Now the paradise in gone. Dirt is stained by blood; the air is spoiled by the sound of swords clashing. People are trying to rebuild somewhat but the cities are now small towns and villages. I live in the only big city that is left. They say we will have to leave soon so we won’t disappear like the others, but like me, some don’t want to leave their home just because of the Demons, that would mean they’ve won. Those people formed together and are fighting against the Demons, the call themselves ‘The Last Hope’ rebellion, and they are. They are all we have left. These people are either normal humans, humans with special powers, or Elves, that what we call them because they don’t talk to us much and when they do they don’t say what they would be like to be called. They are an old race that talk about the old city and look different from normal humans. They are not trusted much. There are even some rebel Demons in the rebellion, these Demons have a mind of their own (most do not and are like wild animals). Now we must fight…or die. like it hate it. I dont really care and btw the next chapter will come out within this or the next week
Really, really, good i didn't even realise it was from first-person perspective till i read it the second time>_<
Thank you I am glad you like it. and hehe I like first person better sometimes, you only can see through that person's eyes and have no idea what the others are thinking
ok the first couple chapter is basically an intro but it's gets better later on and the main chater grows up Entry One: My Name Is Jade. I woke up to my alarm clock that sat on my desk next to my bed. I groaned before turning it off. “I don’t want to go…†I rolled back over. “Come down already!†My mom called from downstairs. “We have to get going!†“Huh?†I got up and ran down the stairs without changing out of my black, smooth nightdress. I went though the living and two hallways to get into the kitchen where my mom was. Everything was already in boxes, besides my room. “What do you mean we’re leaving? We can’t leave! We’ve lived here forever and if we leave now we might as well just surrender to war!†“No I’m not saying that. It’s just that-†“I don’t want to hear it!†I ran up to my room and slammed the door behind me before jumping on my bed and covering my face with my arms. Before the war started my mom and me never fought but now that is all we do. I really do love her and don’t want to fight with her, but I don’t know. I don’t know anything anymore; everything’s too confusing now. “Isn’t life so annoying?†I heard some male’s voice said behind and quickly sat up and faced him. “W-who are you?†He had black hair that went down to his chin, a blackish gray sweater on and baggy blue jeans on, he looked normal… “You may call me Despair. I was sent here to get you?†“Me? What for?†“I am afraid that I do not know. I am only a errand boy at the moment.†He said looking around. “I don’t want to leave…†“Very well. It was up to you. But soon you will change your mind.†He started to fade and soon was gone. “How did he do that?†Just then the door open and in came her mother still wearing her apron. She had her brown wavy hair in a lose fitting bun, blue eyes, and smooth skin. “Look I’m sorry that we have to leave but it is the only way. I really don’t want to lose you like I lost your sister and father and I do hope that we can stop fighting.†“I’m sorry mother but I don’t want to leave. I made a promise that I ten to keep even if it kills me literally. Please go without me I don’t want you to die because of me!†“Please would you just listen to yourself!†Tears started to fall from her eyes “I can not just leave you! I never told you this but-†She never got to finish that sentence. The building started to shake. “Come on!†she rushed over to me and gapped my arm and ran me out of the room, through the hallway, down the stairs but when we got to the door part of the ceiling fell in our way. She then headed to the back door but that had collapsed also. “We’re trapped… Come this way.†She led me down to the basement “There is a trap door around here somewhere. Find it and go through a tunnel and at the end you will find some people to help you.†“But mom-†I turned to look at her and saw her sitting on the ground leaning on the wall “What’s wrong?†I ran to her side. “I’m just a little tired but go! Hurry before you’re trapped and don’t worry about me, I’ll be fine.†“But I can’t…†“Do as I say now!†I nodded before I started to look for the trap door she was talking about. I moved rugs and tabled before I came to the bookshelf. I moved it and there was the tunnel entrance. I looked back to my mom who just smiled before I went into the darkness. I used both of my hands to touch each of the walls to the side of me so I won’t trip. Soon I got to an underground room that looked like it belonged to a warehouse only ten times bigger “Wow…†The room was also filled with many people. Not all of them were humans this must be some of the rebellion…. but why is our house connected to here…was mom…! “It nice to finally meet you.†“Huh?†I looked to who was talking to me and saw a tall man wearing a yellow T-shirt that was torn and showed off his muscles. He had a buzz cut and gray eyes. “Who are you?†“My codename Gray and I’m the leader of this small group for the moment but not for long…†“Why?†“Because we are going to meet up with the leader of all of the resistance.†“The leader!? Now way!†He laughed. “But there are two things that I don’t understand…†“Huh? And what will those be?†“First why are you using codenames?†“Because if the enemies find out our real names they will be able to hurt our families, if anyone here have any, and it’s just better for many reasons that you will learn about later.†“Oh. So what about me.†“Well your name is Jade, right?†I nodded. “Let’s just call you Rose for now since it has nothing to do with your real name.†“But how did you know my name? And why is our house connected to here?†“She never told you did she?†“If you mean my mom then no.†“She help us out a lot and…†“And what? Please tell me.†“I am afraid I am not the one to tell. You’ll have to ask her or the leader.†I looked at the ground. He thought it would be best to change the topic. “So it looks like you need a change of clothes, hmm?†I looked at what I was wearing and he was right. “Yeah. You’re right. But what do I change into?†“We got a few females here who are about your size. Go ask around and just put some pants on and when we get to our next stop then you can change fully there.†I nodded as he walked away. I looked around and saw no one that was my size at first glance so I walked around. Just about everyone here looked like they were poor and was just in a battle. I saw a blonde girl who was about the same height as I was and was on the far side of the room leaning against the wall so I went over to her. “Um, sorry to bother you but Gray said that I should find someone my size to see if I can burrow a pair of pants.†She had her long hair tied in a ponytail; a black loose-fitting fitting shelves less shirt and brown baggy pants that was cut above ankles. She looked at me from head to toe with a sour look. “This will be the one and only time that I will lend something of mine to you, princess.†She said in a cold voice and crouched down. Next to her feet was a big brown bag that she now searched through. She pulled out a pair of pants that looked just like the ones she had on only that they were black and she threw it at me. “T-thanks.†I said putting them on. After a buttoned it up she spoke again “So you’re the one who we went on this detour for? I was hoping for someone who could help out at least a little.†“I can help out.†“We’ll see.†“That we will†“Gather up your things ‘cause we’re moving out!†I heard Gray’s voice yelling over the talking and it grew silent but only for a second when the noise of people standing up and packing their things filled oversized room. The girl zipped up her bag and stood while throwing the strap of her bag over her shoulder. “Wait. What is your name?†“My codename is Snake.†“Okay Snake. I am going to make a bet with you. If I help out more then you think I could ever do then you owe me.†She smiled “Deal.†And with that she followed the crowd that was heading through a tunnel that was directly across from here I had came from, my home. I followed knowing that there will be no turning back; I was now officially part of the war.
