Hazed Love

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  1. Cutsman Gummi Ship Junkie

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    hey guys! this is my second poem posted. I'm just a beginner so be gentle, im most definitly not the best poem writer, not that great. But, i like writing them. So I Present to you!


    Hazed Love

    I have nothing against love personally
    Its just it refuses to come to me
    No matter how much I beg and plead
    It just stays away you see

    Does love hate me?
    Is Cupid being lazy?
    Oh why am I so unfortunate
    For love to be so hazy

    I always heard that love will find you
    Well what if that’s just a lie?
    Living by myself, waking up alone
    The years to come would cause me to cry

    I’ve waited for longer then I can bare
    Its been far too long for me
    It’s about time that I went out
    And found my love to be

    Please tell me wat you think! =D

    *edit* Had to fix a couple of grammatical erors (the last part was a joke.)