Greatness within

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I wrote this a few days ago after talking to my boyfriend who was feeling down since he misses me while he's at uni, anyways after awhile he said he felt better because of our talk and this came in to mind.

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    When I take a look at myself
    And see all I've done over the years
    In which I can remember
    I can never seem to see myself
    As someone who is great in anyway
    So the same old question
    Runs around in my head
    'Am I great at all?'
    But even though I cannot an answer
    Someone else always comes along
    And shows me where the answer is

    To myself I'm not so great
    Just another person
    Walking on this earth
    But to other's to whom I'm close too
    Seems to see the greatness in me
    and while they are showing me
    I can just see how great they see me
    But when I return to being alone
    With not a soul around me
    I still try to look for my own greatness
    That I do for myself

    Deep down I know that my
    Determination,
    To get though all the bad times
    Kindness
    To cheer up a sadden friend
    And my unique personality
    Maybe what makes me so great
    In the eyes of others.
     
  2. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Whoa... I can see the emotion in this poem. Nicely done my friend! :D
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank you~