Goodbyes hurt. A girl walks into the room.And she see a boy with glass's on.He had brown hair.And blue eyes.He comes up to her and says hi. She looks at him.She replys."hello".The boy with the blue eyes,Looks at her and says."I'm new to this school.And i'm trying to make some friends."He said as he smile at the girl.The girl looked at him with a big smile.She seen in his blue eyes.That he was sweet.Well that what she was thinking.Till. . . .He start the lies. .But that more into the story. The next day they talk again. He tells her his name."My name is Taylor."He says.The girl looks at him.She thinks.Taylor.I. . I know that name.She stops. "My name Rihanna.Nobody calls me Anna."She said smiling at the boy.Taylor looks at Rihanna."Well i'll call you Anna"Taylor said with a smile.Was taylor falling for this girl? Was this girl falling for this boy? Rihanna and Taylor.Cute.But was the girl going to be in a lie? Will she end up with her heart broken?Will she be with him forever? Hmmm. . Maybe. The next few days past.The to never talked.He was never at school.Then she fell for another boy but he was 2 years older then her so she got over it.Just then. . Taylor came back.But. . He was not the same. .He wanted to kill himself. He wanted to take a knife and end it all.He said that his mother beats him.He says that he was in a home where he has no mother or father.But he just said. . This is a lie he is telling.But the Rihanna was busy making sure Taylor was okay.She never smiled.She would just run to see him.To make sure he okay.2 months past.Taylor said that he got into a car crash.And he died.He says he seen his mom.She played him a song.BUT HE SAID HE HATES HIS MOTHER.HE SAID HE LIVED IN A HOUES WITH NO MOTHER OR FATHER!. Is this a lie? a month past.Then the lies came out. . A girl who is 12.He lied to.A girl who wants to die for him.And he lied to his own girl friend. .He lied to the girl who loved him.The girl who came just for him.A girl who was there for him.He lied to. . No this can't happend to this girl.She been sad.Very Very sad.She start to think about cuting her self.She told him everything.And he went off and lied to her. Lill Rihanna ask god why he did this.Rihanna start to cry.Why Taylor.Why.She crys.Then a month pasts. Everything was fine. But Rihanna was the one saying she sorry.She sorry for yelling and fighting with him.Why did she do that? WHY!? She not the best right now.She crys,Her brother beats her,Her mom and dad fight,Her sis wins everything.Why? Why must she be in this mess? What did she do? Some one tell me. And all the girls he hurt.Everybody that he hurted. The forgave him? How? HOW?! He was thankful. 4 months past.No war.No fighting. A boy liked Rihanna.They where friends.Then a month past.And they became more.She was happy.Really happy.But 2 months later.He broken up with her for another girl? Rihanna didn't know what to do.She start to yell and fight and cryed."When your ready to say your sorry i'll be here"Rihanna said as she cryed."Good cuz i'm not goin to"The boy said. That broken Rihanna heart.Now she lost all hope and faith.Why is this happening to her? Only her. . She told Taylor.Taylor did't know what to say.But Rihanna got over the break up.Then the boy tryed to get Rihanna again. He "missed" her.But he still with his "Girl friend". Rihanna spoken.Just leave me alone.I'm sick of you and everybody.You should know why.Rihanna said. The boy got up. "WHY BECAUSE YOUR A SPOILED BRAT WHO DOESN'T APPRECIATE WHEN PEOPLE DO NICE THINGS FOR HER OR TRY TO PLEASE HER HOSTLY I DONT CARE ABOUT BEING YOUR FRIEND ANYMORE EVERYONES RIGHT YOU ARE A RUDE LITTLE B!+¢h " THAT! What the boy said.Rihanna looked down."Your right." IS he?Really? Is he really right to say that to her.He hurted her.Then they became friends?!Poor girl.She just want somebody to hold her.And tell her that everything is alright.And she got. . This. .And she was the bad guy? She was the b***? I don't get this!Rihanna was just a girl.With nothing.And she just wanted a somebody to hold her.Some one who cared.But i guess she could never have that.I guess this is how her life go's. . .Taylor looks at Rihanna.Anna? Rihanna layed down on Taylor lap.She start to sing."Tell me that you love me."Taylor smiled"I love you"He said.Rihanna smiled"Lier"She said.Taylor looked down at Rihanna.I'm not lying.He said."Proof it"Said Rihanna. Taylor kissed her lip lightly.She smiles.A REAL smile she showed. Rihanna was happy.But he already had a girl friend.He is dating a 19 year old and he 15.But if their inlove. Rihanna said to her self,I will say goodbye some day.I will say what should have been said.I will some day.But. . . . Good byes hurt. Say what you want i don't care.I'm happy with what i made and nobody is goin to take it down.Any how.This is a story i made about.Well i'm not goin to tell you who it was REALLY about but it a good story right? Lol. Have a nice day everybody! NO THIS IS NOT ABOUT RIHANNA THE SINGER OR THE SUPER HOT TAYLOR
Goodbyes do indeed hurt. Anyway, everything was very nicely written, with each paragraph in-depth. There were some convention and spacing errors, but other than that, it's fine. My only suggestion would be making the text the regular text color, as cyan is kind of hard on some people's eyes.
