Girl from the world of her own

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  1. Sumi suicidé

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    Girl from the World of Her Own
    She’s the girl,
    Everybody knows,
    Lives in a world
    All of her own.
    He puts his hands around her waist
    He rests them on her chest
    He runs them through her hair
    And she just doesn’t care,
    ‘Cause everybody knows,
    That’s the way things go
    With the girl
    From the world
    Of her own.

    She lives all alone,
    In this world of her own,
    She’s got no friends,
    No family,
    No home.
    And everybody knows,
    And nobody cares,
    For the girl
    In the world
    Of her own.

    Then he came,
    He was the boy
    All alone in the world
    From the world
    Inside his head
    He didn’t give a da*n if they cared.
    ‘Cause he just didn’t need them
    In the way that she did,
    And then catastrophe struck.

    He was alone,
    As he laid in bed
    Living in the world
    Inside his head.
    And then the ghost came to him,
    Told him what to say,
    The earth spun around him on that day,
    ‘Cause everybody knew,
    But no one seemed to care,
    As he ran his fingers
    Through her brown hair.

    And now

    She’s the girl
    That everybody knows
    He’s the boy
    Her sanctuary
    Her home.
    He’s who she goes to
    When she’s all alone.

    They live together now,
    In a world all their own,
    And they’re happy.
    Shouldn’t we all be?
     
  2. What? 『 music is freedom 』

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    I actually enjoyed that poem. Interesting story, and the way it is written seems to suit it. It has very good meter too.

    I applaud you with
    nine snaps out of ten.
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    Arigatou gozaimasu~
    I actually was thinking about Haruhi Suzumiya a bit at the beggining....
    xD​
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Wow...this is very nice....it's so sad.

    But you're very good at this, now I need you to teach me to do something like this ^_^
     
  5. Sumi suicidé

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    Thanks xD
    You're really great at poetry and songwriting, etc. so yeah :3