Girl from the World of Her Own She’s the girl, Everybody knows, Lives in a world All of her own. He puts his hands around her waist He rests them on her chest He runs them through her hair And she just doesn’t care, ‘Cause everybody knows, That’s the way things go With the girl From the world Of her own. She lives all alone, In this world of her own, She’s got no friends, No family, No home. And everybody knows, And nobody cares, For the girl In the world Of her own. Then he came, He was the boy All alone in the world From the world Inside his head He didn’t give a da*n if they cared. ‘Cause he just didn’t need them In the way that she did, And then catastrophe struck. He was alone, As he laid in bed Living in the world Inside his head. And then the ghost came to him, Told him what to say, The earth spun around him on that day, ‘Cause everybody knew, But no one seemed to care, As he ran his fingers Through her brown hair. And now She’s the girl That everybody knows He’s the boy Her sanctuary Her home. He’s who she goes to When she’s all alone. They live together now, In a world all their own, And they’re happy. Shouldn’t we all be?
I actually enjoyed that poem. Interesting story, and the way it is written seems to suit it. It has very good meter too. I applaud you with nine snaps out of ten.
Wow...this is very nice....it's so sad. But you're very good at this, now I need you to teach me to do something like this ^_^