Traditional Art Gaara of the Sand - Desert Coffin

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Bond of Flame, Aug 17, 2009.

  1. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Oh, the red line on his neck, that was supposed to be another blood drop... I just didn't like it xD

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    Sorry about the lighting, it's pretty late now, so that's why the quality is so crap...
    What do you think ?

    EDIT: the face is hugely out of proportion, but that's because I didn't sketch this time.
     
  2. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    It's a nice drawing, but the proportions of the face are off. The chin is out-of-shape and the eyes need to be resized because one is bigger (and wider) than the other.
     
  3. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Thanks. I didn't sketch this time, so that's the main reason why it didn't turn out THAT great. What did you like about this drawing, if I may ask? :)
     
  4. Kites Chaser

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    Well aside from it already being stated that the head proportions were off, the ear on the right side is a bit lower than that of the ear on the left side. You should try finishing the head so that the hair can be completed to. Other than that, it's a nice drawing.That tattoo on his forehead is cool looking. :3
     
  5. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    It's Gaara's KANJI OF LOVE :D

    And yes, the kanji is where I'm most proud off..
     
  6. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    His colar bones are a bit slanted.
    They should be more projected towards the throat, and only slanted towards the end.
    Nice job though.

    [I don't want to repeat what was said. B| ]
     
  7. The Graceful Assassin It's Just Like Christmas Morning

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    Pretty good. Though, his skin is a bit too fat, and its kinda slanted a bit.