The moans ring out, the tears they fall, Yet there stand you like you did nothing at all. On the floor I cry, curled up tight, Wishing for the dawn on this endless night. When did I hurt you? When did I try? How many times must you make me cry? I loved you then, I love you still, Even as you force me to your will. You eyes with that gentle gleam, They seem to glisten when I scream. What happened to you? Why did you change? Will we ever be able to go back to those happy days? You saved me before, but not this time. As it’s you who’s creating this pain of mine…
I feel that with the rythmn and flow in this that you give a strong sense of sadness and betrayal. I can't help but think that there is something hidden beneath the edges of this poem, as though you are dealing with something worse than betrayal...broken heart or possible going for rape? Great poem Demi.
It's pretty much a mix of all three really, long story behind it. Let's just say me and my IRL friends are pure evil to our RP characters <_< >_> Thankies.
