Found Under The Sun

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  1. angel2kool4u Merlin's Housekeeper

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    this is a story i started writing a few months ago........i moved from lousiana to florida and my best friend ever was devestated......so i began writing this story for her.....the main character is me and in the third chapter my best friend will come along......i hope you like it. Most of the characters in the story are real, but some i made up like ryan.....there's really no ryan i know......now it's not really long for each chapter, but i still hope you like it!



    Found Under the Sun
    Chapter One: the problems
    With morning



    The night drifted off forgetting the sun and leaving no room. The wind was calm which was just perfect. The florida nights were always the best. An eleven year-old girl named Diana thought they were the best, too. In fact, they were the only nights Diana has ever seen. She has lived there all her life and loved it ever since. She has always thought of the world as a small place even in social studies. Well, that is for right now.
    The sun rose and looked like it came from the ground. Diana was never a morning person, but a perfect night. Diana was asleep in her bed as her clock said 7:29 am. The sun was in her face, but she couldn’t tell because she was too busy sleeping. She was dreaming about the handsome boy in her class named Ryan and, of course, has never noticed her. He was one of the popular boys that everyone loved and some girls would only think about him, like Diana. She had time to think about him because she had no friends, she didn’t care about her grades, and was always bored. The clock struck 7:30 and the buzzing began. Diana ,as I said, was not a morning person so she hit snooze and checked what time it was. “7:30!!!†She rose with shock and rushed to her closet and picked the first thing she saw which happened to be a pair of black kapris and a light, green shirt with a magenta baseball cap. She ran to the bathroom to get dressed. She was going so fast, she tried to pull up her kapris, but managed to fall.
    The school bell rang and Mrs. Crump shut the door while calling out roll and everyone said here when their names were called. She was about to say Diana’s name. She was running to class as fast as she could so she didn’t notice the door was closed. BANG!!!! She walked into the door head first and fell on the floor. Mrs. Crump jumped in shock and ran to the door and quickly opened it as wind blew from the speed. Diana picked up her head and talked with a bit of a croaky voice, “Here.â€