Forgotten Tear Chapter One The Birthday Present Tabatha was just a girl, she just turned 5 and her sister promised to take her to the park for her birthday, her sister was already waiting for her outside. She put her Black jeans on and her favorite red neon shirt and before she left she put her light brown long jacket on and ran outside. It was October so it was still cold outside and which made her happy, she liked the cold, because usually she feels hot. She smiled at her sister and nodded for them to go, they got to the park and the first thing she did was jump on the swings and swing as high as she could get. Her sister swung next to her smiling but all of a sudden her day turned upside down as dark creatures appeared around them. One headed right toward her sister and Tabatha jumped in the way soon dark flames surrounded her and the creature held her heart, and next thing she knew she was slaughtering heartless with a black dark scythe.. When she was done she was so tired and weak, she fell to the ground and looked at her sister sadly.”sister...help me please...” she begged weakly but her sister just stared at her frightened and ran away and before she faded into the dark cold night she looked back at her angry .”I wish you were dead you worthless pathetic thing.” she yelled and left. Tabatha had changed into a nobodie and her name became Xathabat, Xathabat started to cry even though she knew she shouldn’t because it would only make her more cold and soon she shut her eyes and blacked out. Soon she felt warm as if someone had her in their arms and she took a peek to see if anyone was there, she saw a hooded man carrying her into a purple and black portal, she was to tired and cold to fight against them and soon she faded back into darkness. Soon she had awoken in a white room and when she stood up and looked at a hooded figure in a high chair she took a few steps back.” what do you want from me.” she asked afraid. The figure just laughed at her. “ your just a child, you don’t know anything.” he chuckled. Xathabat got angry at him laughing at her and made fist with her two hands.” you didn’t answer me, and just cause im little doesn’t mean I don’t know anything, I actually know a lot!” she yelled at him. He just smiled at her.” then tell me child, what happened to you at the park?.” he asked. Xathabat started to get tears in her eyes but she tried her best to hide them”I..don’t remember.” she cried. The guy laughed. “These creatures, called heartless, stole your heart and made you a nobodie just like me while you were at the park and when you asked for help from your sister all she did was run away, I have created a organization of nobodies so we can take over kingdom hearts and get our hearts back .” he said with a evil smirk on his face. Xathabat hung her head as she started to remember what happened. She could image her sister running and turning back telling her how worthless and pathetic she was and that she should die, she couldn’t hold the tears in anymore and started to cry.” then can I join you...” she asked still crying. He nodded yes,”my name is Xemnes and I shall be your superior and you shall follow my rules, also you will be assigned a mission, you shall be number 15 of organization 13.” he said stern and a dusk appeared in front of Xathabat.” this is a lesser nobodie, it’s called a dusk and it shall show you where your room is.” he said and Xathabat nodded and followed the dusk to her room and as they walked down the blank halls she started to wonder in space.’ I wonder why its organization 13 if there are 15 nobodies...’ but soon her space trip ended when she bumped into someone, she quickly bowed.”im sorry sir.” she said shyly and afraid he’d yell at her so she just continued to follow the dusk, but the guy turned back at her.”it ok!” he yelled back, and made her sigh of relief but the voice seemed familiar but she had to follow the dusk.’that voice sounded like...leo’s voice but that’s impossible he disappeared...but is it possible..’ she thought to herself and looked back at the figure walking away. When they finally got to her room the dusk vanished and Xathabat sat on her bed and laid back and closed her eyes.” maybe these people could actually be my friends...” she said to herself. Chapter 2 The Meeting Xathabat woke up to a chill and sat up she held her hand to her stomach as someone knocked on the door.”Xathabat, time to get your mission today!” they yelled. Xathabat took a deep breath and nodded.”ok!” she yelled back and got out of bed and took her shower, as the warm water hit her skin she sighed.”I had another dream of my past..” she said to herself. She got out of the shower and into black jeans and the organization cloak she fixed her long dark brown hair in the mirror, she has grown since the day she joined the organization and she was 19 now . She sighed as she opened the door and down the halls she looked at the white walls as she passed by them.”maybe we should paint the place...”she said to herself, someone behind her laughed.”but then it wouldn’t be fun to see the different rooms that have color.” he laughed. Xathabat sighed and turned to see Xigbar.”of course you’re the only one that would say something that’s stupid...” she said, he gave her a glare.” that’s not nice to say to an elder.” he joked since he was older then her. She just gave him a look that said what ever and kept walking down the halls ignoring what he was mumbling off about. Cause today was the day she would get her first real mission and didn’t want him bringing her down with his rude comments. She couldn’t get that dream out of her head and it kept replaying, mostly the part where her sister called her pathetic and worthless.”maybe I should have just died...” she said to herself softly as she reached the meeting room. She took her seat as Xigbar finally left her alone to leave her by herself because she always came to the meetings early. She would sit there alone to think and try to remember who she was. But today was different she kept thinking of the dream she had.“im...just a worthless pathetic useless heartless nobodie...I don’t deserve to live but there has to be a reason to be here...” she whispered to herself staring at the white clean floor. Soon the meeting room was filled with the rest of the members and Xathabat just stared at the floor until Xemnes started talking.“ First we will discuss about the first mission of the day, Xigbar you will go and turn Beast into a heartless, and Xathabat your first mission is to look for the keyblader on destiny island.” he said, Xathabat nodded but before the meeting ended Xemnes looked at hooded figure and nodded.” you will join Xathabat on her mission.” he said, Xathabat got disappointed but tried to see who the figure was, it turned out to be the guy she bumped into when she first came to the castle, she sighed and blushed a bit from embarrassment .‘ Hopefully he still doesn’t remember me...’ she thought. The guy nodded and smiled at her giving her the thumbs up. When the meeting ended Xathabat made sure to be the last one out and the guy was waiting for her.”so me and you are going on mission together kid.” he joked and patted her back. Xathabat just nodded and walked past him, but he just followed her.” don’t worry im still not mad when you bumped into me.” he smiled, Xathabat just blushed more.’how embarrassing...’ she thought, he poked her cheek and laughed.”don’t worry, its nothing to be embarrassed about.” he chuckled. Xathabat just looked at him comfused but smiled untill she noticed she was smiling and stopped and looked away.’why am I smiling...’ she thought and walked down the halls, the guy waved.”see you on the mission.” he yelled. Chapter 3 Memories Xathabat was sitting in her room replaying the dream again before her and the guy left, she was right at the part when her sister turned to her when the door knocked.”time to go.” they yelled and she glared at the door.”ok.” she yelled back and opened the door to the guy smiling at her.”did you finish your will?” he joked. Xathabat ignored him and just made a portal.”lighten up will you.” he said before he entered the portal with her behind him. When they got to the beach of destiny island first thing he did was look at the ocean and smiled back at her.”we should make sand angels huh.” he joked. “Is that all you do is joke around?” she asked looking at him blankly he didn’t answer he just shrugged and smiled again.”what is your name by the way?” she asked, the guy just skipped a rock in the ocean and turned to her and walked right past her. ‘ did he just ignore me?!’ she yelled in her mind and walked behind him as they walked on the edge of the beach looking for the keyblader, its been 5 hours and they searched the whole island, soon the guy was playing with some fog. “That’s a really cool power you have.” she said as she watched him playing with the fog. “ thanks, and wow you said something nice for once.” he joked and shrugged her shoulder.”hey I can be nice, im just mean when people annoy me.” she said and looked away from him.”so I annoy you all the time?” he looked at her with a smirk.”..no...” she mumbled under her breath. “Then how come your mean all the time?” he asked and smiled at her. Xathabat looked at him smiling.”because, you wont tell me your name.” she joked back. He smiled.”so if I tell you my name, will you be nicer?” he said and Xathabat nodded.”ill even lighten up.” she said. So he nodded and took his hood off and smiled.”my name is Xeol.” he said and messed her hair up Xathabat studied him.’he seems familiar...’ she thought he looked at her weird.”what are you doing, giving me an espection?” he joked, she backed off and smiled. “What you seem like the type that carries weapons on a plane sir.” she joked back the day started to end as the sun began to set.” we will finish searching tomorrow.” he said and made a portal and left with her behind him, Xathabat smiled as they both waved goodbye and she left for bed. Xathabat was sleeping and this time she had a different Dream. She was only 3 and her birthday was in 3 months, she was walking down the street by the beach when she saw a little boy running with some apples and knocked her over, there was a guy running after the boy yelling so they both jumped up and ran to the beach, by the time they got there the guy had lost them, so they both sat down she looked at the older boy.”why was that man chasing you?” she asked, the boy looked at her and smiled.”because I stole 2 apples, want one?” he asked and handed her an apple.”I mean you did help me when you could have turned me over and my name is leo what’s yours?.” he joked, she smiled and nodded “my name is Tabatha” she said and they ate their apples and when the sun started to set he smiled and waved to her.”ill see you tomorrow.” he said and ran off, she nodded and left too, but the next day she waited but he never came and she kept coming back and he still never came so she gave up and went home. And for the rest of the night Xathabat kept having that dream. Chapter 4 Friends Xathabat woke up lazily and rubbed her head she got up and took her daily shower and fixed her hair, she put her organization cloak on and black but faded jeans with some boots. She walked into the hall and stretched until someone from behind messed her hair up, she turned to see Xeol smiling at her.”ready to go, miss sleepy?” he asked and poked her shoulder. Xathabat smiled back and nodded.“ Yes.” she said and made a portal and they both entered.”you know, the beach is going to get boring if he keeps sending us here.” he said. Xathabat nodded in agreement and smiled.”might as well enjoy it why it still isn’t boring then huh.” she joked back, Xeol looked at her with a serious face.”sorry...” he said, she just looked at him weird.”why?” she asked, he just shrugged.” I don’t know why, just feel like I have to.” he said and smiled again and they began their search again for the keyblader, Xathabat put her hands behind her head.” so, do you remember your somebodies name?” she asked, he nodded but stayed quiet, she just looked at him.” so, what is it.” she asked, he looked at her blankly.” leo...” he said and continued walking. Xathabat put her own blank face. “You know I use to know a kid named leo, but he disappeared...” she mumbled, Xeol looked at her.” really? That’s funny...” he said and they kept walking down the beach. Soon the sun started to set again and Xathabat sighed.”when is this keyblader going to show up.” she mumbled, Xeol smiled.” Don’t know, but we’ll find them” he said and patted her back. Xathabat smiled.” true.” she said and sat at the edge of the waves. Xeol sat next to her and smiled.”what to tired to make a portal already?” he joked, Xathabat nodded.” no, it just I never saw a sunset and I wanted to watch it, you can go if you want.” she said and smiled at him. Xeol nodded and poked her arm.” and leave my little sister behind, no way.” he joked, Xathabat looked at him confused.” little sister?” she asked softly. Xeol nodded.” your like a little sister to me.” he said and poked her shoulder. Xathabat smiled and nodded.” ok, big brother.” she said and she made a portal and they left and returned and waved goodbye, she went to bed and stared at the ceiling. “I have a friend.” she smiled and went to sleep. Chapter 5 A Dream Xathabat couldn’t sleep, she kept turning and twisting, its been 3 days since her and Xeol had been friends and had been searching Destiny Island for the keyblader. She woke up startled and cold, she walked into the white halls in her white pajama gowen, she walked outside and sat by a fountain she played with the water with her finger. She heard a giggle behind her but she ignored it thinking she was hearing things but she heard it again louder and when she looked it was a little girl smiling at her with dark brown short hair, it looked like herself when she was 10 she skipped close by Xathabat and tapped her knee.” excuse me miss but do you know who I am?” she asked. Sweatily Xathabat’s eyes grew wide and she was speechless.”I know im a nobodie and my name is Xathabat, but I don’t know why I exist? What is my purpose, I don’t remember my favorite color or who my mommy is.” the little girl said and looked at Xathabat sadly about to cry.”will you be my mommy” the little girl asked softly, Xathabat shut her eyes tight and when she opened them she was back in her bedroom laying in her bed, she sat up cold, she could see her breath and she looked around the room to make sure no one else was there and sighed when she saw that no one was. She jumped at the sound of someone knocking on her door lightly, she tip toed to the door and peeked it open looking down incase it was the girl but just saw black shoes, and when she looked up she saw Xeol smiling.”is something wrong, I heard crying?” he asked looking only a little worried.’was I crying in my sleep? Xathabat thought and nodded no.”I wasn’t crying, and im ok, thank you.” she said coldly and shut the door in his face and slid down the door to the floor and sighed as she fought back her tears. She could hear Xeol say something on the others side of the door and a then leave, she hung her head.”im sorry...” she muttered. The next day she was outside sitting by the fountain feeling the warm rays of the sun and sighed. She looked in the fountain water at her reflection and sighed sadly.”it was just a bad dream...” she said to herself.”what was it about?” a voice said behind her she turned to see Saix.”it was nothing, just a stupid dream is all.” she said standing up , he looked at her evilly.” really, are you sure?” He smiled evilly “cause I heard crying last night, or was I just dreaming?” he said darkly. Xathabat looked away and nodded.” maybe you were just dreaming because I don’t cry.” she said angry. Saix smiled and warped away and Xathabat sighed as the day turned hot and she had to return inside and stayed in her room for the rest of the day writing she kept replying the dream in her head and started to hear someone crying and looked around seeing the a girl that kinda looked like her but with light brown hair she was crying in the corner. Xathabat fell backwards on her dresser knocking down some pictures and hair brush gasping for air as her insides started to freeze she just stared at the woman wide eyed. It seemed like the woman didn’t notice her and she reached her hand out to the crying girl but once the girl looked up at her she vanished and someone was knocking on the door.”are you alright in there.” they yelled. Xathabat sighed trying to calm down.”yes..” she said and stood back up and cleaned up the broken picture framed and laid in bed and went to sleep having the dream again of the girl and the fountain. Chapter 6 Change Xathabat woke up shivering, she was still in her pajamas as she slowly walked to Xeols room and knocked on the door. The door creaked opened and she could see xeols face looking down at her with his green eyes and messy brown hair.”what is it?” he asked sleepily, Xathabat hung her head embarrassed.”well...I had a bad dream...and I was wondering...if I could sleep on the floor next to your bed?” she said shaky, she was afraid of her dreams and afraid to sleep alone ever since that one dream of the little girl at the fountain, Xeol just looked at her weird and opened the door the rest of the way and allowed her to walk inside, he laid a blanket on the floor for her and threw a pillow to her.” what’s wrong?” he asked sitting on his own bed. Xathabat sighed and laid on the floor and snuggled her blanket. “ it’s a nightmare I have been having...about this girl who doesn’t know who she is...and she keeps asking me...who am I? And where do I belong...and I just don’t know..I don’t know what to say to her...and she’s so lonely at a fountain...at first I though it was the fountain in the courtyard but its not...the fountain she’s at is more bigger and the waters so sparkly and beautiful where the moons bright reflection shines on its water...” she mumbled as she closed her eyes and listened as xeol laid in his own bed and fell asleep. Xathabat couldn’t sleep, afraid of going back to the fountain but once she dozed off into sleep, she had a different dream, of when she met Xeol. She felt happy for once, he was the first friend she’s had, and she has never had a friend before without thinking they hated her. When Xathabat woke up, she felt warm and peaceful, she sat up and smiled and saw xeol was still sleeping so she tip toed out and went back in her room, she got dressed in her black skirt and red shirt and went into the living room and sat at the piano and started to play as she sang Only Hope- by Mandy Moore ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRHM8mLp3DY ). ‘for once, I have a true memory...for once...my memory is a happy memory...thanks Xeol...’ she thought as she slid the tip of her finger on the keys of the piano as she walked to the courtyard and sat at the fountain and played with the water.” someone is up early.” joked a voice, Xathabat could tell it was xeol but when she turned to look it was demyx and she just sighed and turned back to the fountain. Demyx looked sadly at her. “ how come you only be happy around Xeol and not the rest of us, is it cause you like him?” he asked smiling and xathabat glared at him.” because...hmm... I don’t know, I just have a feeling I can trust him...he’s like a older brother to me I guess...” she said and shrugged. Demyx crossed his arms.” so you don’t trust me?” he joked and smiled. “ was that you playing piano this morning, if it was, your good.” he said and patted her back, she just sighed but it was weird having him so close to her, she stood up and walked back to her room, demyx just watched her leave and before she left she could hear him say.”was it something I said?” but she ignored him and when she got to her room she sat on her bed and sighed and stared at the floor for the rest of the day trying to figure out why demyx was trying to talk to her, this time she slept in her own room but she had a dream of the little girl with her family but soon the family behind her faded and Xeol and demyx where at her side and she grew up and looked like Xathabat, she woke up startled and stared at the ceiling for the rest of the night.’why have I been getting...good dreams...is it cause I have friends now...’ she said and turned to her side.”im not alone anymore...am I?” she whispered to herself as a tear ran down her cheek and sideways off the bed hitting the hard cold tiles. Soon she blacked out and when she woke up it was in the middle of the night and she could hear whispers, they sounded like a little girl who was frightened and sad, she kept asking where she belonged and asked who she was. Xathabat looked around the room wide eyed looking for the source of the voice and soon, the whispers turned into sobbing. Soon the room grew completely black and Xathabat fell to her knees and held her head as it began to throb and sting, blood leaked from her soft lips and she started to cry blood. Xathabat closed her eyes tight as she screamed in pain as she felt a hand on her shoulder and soon bright white cracks shattered the darkness around her and she looked behind her at xeol with his hand resting on her shoulder, his face was worried but yet had a frightened expression, Xathabat hung her head and noticed her hands were smaller then usual and she realized she turned into a little girl version of herself and she gasped as she saw a blood puddle on the floor with her scythe next to her with blood on it also.” where did all this blood come from?” she asked xeol afraid of the answer.’please say, I didn’t hurt anyone...’ she thought as xeol took a deep breath and pointed at her wrist. Her wrist were all bloody and she gasped she looked up at the mirror and saw the bloody tears and the blood on her lip, she tried not to cry but she started to whimper and sat on her bed crying, xeol sat next to her and hugged her, which calmed her down.” we should bandaged you up first.” he said as he left, Xathabat sighed and looked at her wrist.”why...” she whispered to herself, she jumped when she heard the door swing open with xeol holding bandages, he sat next to her and bandaged her wrist, he hugged her.” tell me what’s wrong?” he said and started at her with his green eyes, xathabat just stared at the floor. But she took a deep breath and told him about the voices she heard and how all she saw was black.” I guess, im just confuse who I am, and I don’t understand if your really my friend, its nothing against you, its just how am I going to know your different then the other people who told my I could trust them and then they leave me telling me how pathetic I am...” she mumbled, Xeol hugged her tighter and wiped the blood off her face with a tissue.” I promise not to leave you, and your not pathetic..” he said, his voice was different then usual, it was more gentle and peaceful, Xathabat hugged back and nodded.” if you say so..” she said, Xeol smiled and messed her hair up and stood up and pointed a finger at her.” I know so.” he said and went back to bed, Xathabat sighed as she wrapped herself in her blanket and fell asleep thinking about when she became a nobodie. Chapter 7 Beach Day Xathabat woke up to a knock on her door.” come on get up lazy!” they said loudly through the door, they sounded excited too. Xathabat woke up and put her white dress with a green silk Collor on, she opened the door to see demyx and sighed.” what is it?” she asked. Demyx smiled as xeol peek over his shoulder.” we were wondering if you wanted to come to the beach with us, since you don’t have duty today.” demyx said, xeol just nodded and smiled. Xathabat sighed and hung her head and shrugged.” sure, why not?” she smiled. Both guys smiled wider and ran off in a portal they had already made, Xathabat shrugged and ran after them. When they got their xeol and demyx were already in the water splashing each other, and demyx was winning with his water clones, since they were busy, xathabat went off into a cave and looked at the drawings on the wall. She felt the cold hard wall with her hand gently and walked bare footed on the warm rock beneath her. She took a breath as a chill ran up her back and she saw a forest on the other side of the cave, she stared at it and walked slowly towards it as voices called her towards it. The dark woods grew closer and she grew colder as her mind started to fog up, she reached her hand out to it and just when the very tip of her finger tip was barley touching it, she heard her name behind her and she turned back to see xeol waving. “ hey, come join us!” he yelled out to her, xathabat nodded and turned back to the forest but it disappeared she looked at the empty rocky wall for a comment but just ran back to xeol and nodded, and they ran back to the beach” demyx had to go on a mission so he’s gone.” xeol said and smiled at her, Xathabat nodded but she was to lost in thoughts about the dark forest she thought she saw. Xeol poked her shoulder.”hello, did you hear me, what are you thinking about?” he asked looking at her concerned, she just looked at him blankly.”oh, nothing...” she sighed and sat at the edge of the water. Xeol crossed his arms.” oh really, you want to tell me about that forest , or is it just nothing?” he said serous. Xathabat looked at him surprised.” so you saw it too, and I don’t know, I just felt like I have been inside that forest before, like there’s someone I knew in there, like their begging and crying for help...did you hear the voices?” she asked. Xeol nodded.”no, did you?” he asked and by the tone he was using he was she can tell that worried him. “No, It just felt like the forest was calling me is all.” she said and smiled at him.” im joking.” she said so he wouldn’t have to worry and punched his arm lightly and splashed him. Xeol smiled.” ok, but stay away from it next time silly.” he said and splashed her back, xathabat nodded and poked his stomach.”ok.” she said as the sun soon started to set and they went back to the castle, they waved good bye in the halls and as he left down the hall into his room xathabat opened her door and saw the Dark forest. Xathabat’s eyes grew dark as blood started to seep out of her lip again and she walked inside the forest, she walked up to a flat rock and stood on top of it as she floated up and started to glow a bright white light with sparkles floating down around her like falling stars. And her hair turned blond and her eyes dark blue and the rock turned into a puddle and she fell asleep for the rest of the night in the forest dreaming of when she 2nd say at the castle. Chapter 8 Newbie? Xathabat was standing in the center of the meeting room, Xemnes looked down at her.” you are not going on a mission and that’s final! You are to stay and continue the experiments as plan.” xemnes said xathabat looked at him sadly as tears filled her eyes.” WHY NOT, JUST BECAUSE IM DIFFERENT, JUST BECAUSE I HAVE FEELINGS UNLIKE NORMAL NOBODIES!” she screamed angry and stomped off to her room and slammed the door and cried on her bed.”why am I the one that has to be different” she whimpered soon she opened her eyes and found herself in the forest and wiped her tears away. She sat up and noticed she was sitting in a puddle she stood up quickly and dried her clothes with a little flame from her hand. When she looked at the water she noticed something was wrong with her reflection she stroked her fingers through her long blond hair and blinked a few times.” what?” she mumbled to herself. Xathabat was surprised and backed away slowly. She ran away deeper into the forest and kept looking for a way out. The deeper she got the darker the forest grew and she started to grow cold. Soon she heard voices calling out from a small light ahead, she ran faster towards it hoping to find someone even if it was saix. Once she saw a hood figure she smiled but then stopped in her tracks. “Wait..what if they don’t recognize me...” she whispered to herself and just when the figure turned back to see what the sound was she hid behind a tree. “ show yourself!” they demanded and she could tell it was xeols voice. Xathabat smiled and took a deep breath and walked from behind the tree in the open area. She saw xeol glaring at her.” tell me where xathabat is?” he demanded, she just sighed.” of course, you don’t recognize me...” she said softly and hung her head. He looked at her surprised.” is it you, xathabat?” he said and took a few steps closer to her and rested his hand on her shoulder.”what happened to you?” he asked gently, she looked up at him and started to explain as they both sat down on a near by rock.Once she was done explaining xeol looked at her worried.” why did you lie to me when I asked if you heard voices?” he said. She shrugged.”I don’t know..I guess so you wouldn’t worry about me.” she replied and sighed and hung her head.” im sorry I lied to you.” she said. Xeol crossed his arms.” you shouldn’t have to lie to me.” he said as both of them stood up.” what are we going to tell the others?” he said and closed his eyes as he began to think, xathabat did the same and kinda hummed as she thought. “We’ll just say you’re a new nobodie.” xeol said and smiled and punched her arm. She nodded and smiled in agreement.” that’s a wonderful idea, thanks.” she said and hugged his arm tightly as they walked back to the castle. As they entered she saw demyx and waved, he just smiled and waved back.’ he doesn’t recognize me either.’ she thought as they passed her old room she froze in front of it and looked at the plain white door. She sighed as xeol shrugged for them to keep walking they finally made it to the meeting room and knocked on the door.” who is it?” xemnes yelled through the door. “Xeol and I have found another nobodie.” he said and looked at her.” what will your new name be?” he asked her, she thought for a moment. “ how about Marxina?” she said with a smile, he smiled back and nodded.”ok,” he said as the door to the meeting room opened with a creek and they walked in. Xeol bowed. “ I found her in the forbidden forest, it’s a mystery how she became a nobodie and she doesn’t remember anything sir.” he said and looked up at xemnes. Xemnes nodded and motioned for him to leave, xathabat took a deep breath as xemnes started to explain the nobodies and she got a new room. Once she got to her room she laid on her bed and sighed and went to bed. Chapter 9 Restart Xathabat laid on her side.” Well…Marxina…time to get up.” She said as she sat up with a sigh and stared at the ceiling.” Because Xathabat is dead…” she mumbled to herself. She got out of bed and put her uniform on she brushed her teeth and walked to the mirror with her eyes shut afraid of not seeing herself. She slowly peeked on eye open and saw her blond hair and looked into her reflections dark blue eyes.” At least I still have my eyes.” She sighed as she closed them and turned around and walked down the hall, as she went to her old room.” I’m supposed to help search for you…” she whispered to herself ‘but I can’t find you..’ she thought looking at the blank door with a sign on the door knob that read ‘ Xathabat’s room, if u dare to enter, you will die…’ she reached for the handle but her arm stopped by someone else holding it.” I wouldn’t do that unless you want to be missing yourself.” They joked , she turned to the voice taking her hand away. And saw that it was Xigbar, she sighed.’great him..’she thought disappointed as she walked down the halls and noticed he was following her. She turned sharply at him.”What is it you want..” she demanded from him. He smiled.” im just going to the meeting room too.” he said. She turned back around angry but tried to calm down.’yeah right, when I was Xathabat you only went there early when I did just to bug me..’ she sighed. When she got to the meeting room she sat in her old chair and someone started laughing at her.” ha she’s sitting in the wrong chair.” Laughed a cloaked figure. Xathabat blushed and sat in the chair she was given earlier. Xemnes raised his hand for silence and then lowered it.”since Xathabat Is missing, that traitor, Marxina will be accompanying you Xeol.” he said. Xeol nodded.”yes sir.” he replied. As the meeting went on Xathabat tried to imagine herself as a new member.’I don’t think I can live like this my whole life...I cant use a different name...I cant live a lie..” she thought. Soon she heard a voice calling her name and saw Xeol smiling at her.” come on the meeting ended, lets go Xath- I mean Marxina..” he said and grabbed her arm pulling her with him through the portal. When they entered it they took their normal spot and sat down but soon they heard foot prints and turned back seeing a kid walking in the sand towards them. It was a short kid with brown spiky hair. Xathabat could feel the power of the keyblade in him she gave him a glare and Xeol gave her a push on the shoulder.”calm down.” he whispered to her. She nodded and looked away at the ocean.” hey, who are you guys, I have never seen you on this island?” the spiky haired kid asked. “ well you’ll see us more often, we’ll come here every day until you find the key..” Xeol said and he and Xathabat warped away back to the castle, Xathabat was giggling.” just imagine his confused face.” she giggled but covered her mouth, she didn’t like to giggle or laugh. Xeol smiled.” why did you stop? Your giggle isn’t bad.” he smiled and messed her hair up. Xathabat smiled back. As the day ended and Xeol Went off to bed Xathabat went to her new room. But as she passed her old room she could hear something, someone’s voice comeing from the other side of the door.’is someone in my room.’ she thought angry. She opened the door wide open and what she saw made her gasp and fall back, but when she fell back she didnt hit the floor she fell through a puddle and as she fell deeper into the water the forest grew smaller and finally she passed out. When she woke up she awoke in her bed she looked like herself again she stared at her hands confused. Soon she heared a knock on the door. ” come on get up lazy!” they said loudly through the door, they sounded excited too. Xathabat sat up relizeing she was at the day she turned in Marxina she smiled.”I will not go into the forest this time.” she said to herself and as the say went on she ignored the voices and forest.
First reaction- WALL OF TEXT. Needs to be broken down, huge chunks of words are incredibly unappealing. Pictures are a pretty good choice, you've used them to the point that it isn't annoying. The chapter 2 picture is cute <: Right so, onto the actual story. Thankfully it makes sense (as opposed to the majority of stories here) but your sentence structure is odd. Even the first sentence dragged out for too long and had far too many commas o.O Here, I'll show you. "Tabatha was just a girl, she just turned 5 and her sister promised to take her to the park for her birthday, her sister was already waiting for her outside." COULD HAVE BEEN "Tabatha was just a girl, barely past five. For her birthday her sister had promised to take her to the park, and now she was waiting outside." Also, beware of using capital letters correctly <: There are times where you've started some character dialect but the first word in the sentence isn't capitalised- remember, even within speech words and pronouns must have capital letters. Your spelling is decent, which is good x3 I think even the smallest improvements such as breaking the chapters into bitesized chunks would make the world of a difference <3 You've done well, though. Keep going 8D Oh and guys, I know you're fans of this story, but the spam in here was awful D: Ive deleted some posts- but you could always replace them with worthwhile, constructive replies. <3
