For diamonds do appear to be, just like broken glass to me <3

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  1. Juicy Chaser

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    I love doing these things on the spot 8D


    <3



    I lie.
    Your arms a haven from strife,
    "Hey 'honey,
    How about we stay here for life?"
    Out all alone
    I feel cold inside.
    Without your sweet embrace
    A part of me dies
    Again, and again,
    Now fading away,
    Lucky you're here now
    You promise you'll stay.
    A whisper in my ear,
    "I'll always be here",
    You're safe in my hold, you know,
    There's no need to fear.

    How could I live?
    Away from your love,
    The world would be dark
    And I'd be no dove,
    My wings would be torn,
    There'd be no room to be free,
    Trapped in a cage
    With no "you and me",

    So I'm so glad you're here,
    And a part of me is whole,
    I don't ask for gifts, no show, no parade,
    Just your company, and for once
    Your arms are no charade.
    I don't ask for gifts, no show, no damned parade.
    'Cause diamonds do appear to be
    Just like broken glass to me.


    <3


    For him ~









    Yes, I know the last stanza is a little different with the rhythm etc. I don't care. I like poetry without limits <3

    Any thoughts?
     
  2. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Very nice =). It all flowed really well and it was very well written and stuff xD.
     
  3. Juicy Chaser

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    <3
    Thanks for reading this :3

    Thanks
    Yeah gawd I am in love with those two lines right now xD
    I think I shall be writing a few more on the spot poems ~
     
  4. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    Pwetty.

    Did you know I was a Panic at the disco fan? =3
     
  5. Juicy Chaser

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    No but I do now xD
    Your sig = smexx :3
     
  6. Hopefulwishes Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was SOOOOOOOOOOOO cute. My mom used to feel that way about my dad. :(