cnc please? I don't care how harsh it is.. oh and credit to Jason Smith on flickr for the original eye. And Nomura for the original Kingdom Hearts game with the clip shots of namine and roxas in it.
Hmm.... Dear, the problem with this is that the clipped images are choppy, and too small. They are also low quality and blurry; I can't make out who those characters are. My guess is that you wanted to show Namine and Roxas encountering each other. There are many tutorials on how to render images using Photoshop, so I suggest you use those. As for the eye, it just looks like you painted it, and it doesn't look like you used different layers for each color, either. There's also the gradient tool, which could have helped you with this. It's pretty clear that you're starting with this, and well...I'd suggest starting with very simple/beginners tutorials. It's all about practice and experimenting with the tools and just about everything.