Traditional Art First time here @_@

So I drew something, and figured out the camera takes some good pics.

http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/tt332/kaymoy04/again003.jpg



CnC?

 

The detail is good, but the hand and the gun drew my attention, and I can't focus on anything else now. The hand/arm is way to small, and the gun just looks awkward. But overall the drawing is nice, with only a few other, small mistakes.

 

Great detail, but the anatomy's kinda screwy. Study the human figure and you'll see basic proportions that'll come natural as you draw them.

 

It's good for one of your first serious drawings. Next time try and draw the body straight; working on a slant was probably the reason things look out of proportion.

The head's a little small and wonky, and the chin seems far too pointy. I know some people like the style of pointy chins, but it just seems wrong to me :/

Her right hand is too small. I like her outfit though <:

You might wanna look up some tips on drawing eyes <3 although she looks rather hypnotic xD

 

wow good work for your first time but i think you should try and not put her in a slant, i also do this alot since i cant write straight either =P

i think you should re draw this and maybe add some more detail such as going over the outline of the drawing darker, or maybe colouring it in

GOOD JOB ;D