Digital Art First piece in like two and a half years

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by GhettoXemnas, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Frank Ocean.

    CnC please crackers and cheese all that good ****.
     
  2. Jiηx You're such a loser.

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    personally, i'd move the text off his body and to the right, it's sorta all "yo where's my money!?" in your face right on him, draws away focus, but I think moving off into one of the empty spaces will do it good.
     
  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    I truly love your way with words, Vivi.
     
  4. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    Move the text a few pixels down and to the left and the placement should be fine.

    My worry is that is feels empty on the left side. If it were me, I would feel a need to emphasize the left edge of his face with something darker. Just me.

    I didn't know you did graphic work, but you aren't bad. Keep it up.