This is the most people I've ever drawn in one frame. Another picture from a moment in Vampire Knight. Zero was too big to make the frame :B(: CnC?
eh...this picture is really unclear, it's hard to see xD Atleast rotate the image, I had to turn my head sideways o: I know scanners can't always be easily bought, but yeah. The girl's head is a bit of an odd shape, almost as if her eyes are bulging out. Try and make the line of her head more smooth and give her hair more volume; its flat. You've done well on the eyes and the hands- many people struggle with them, but the one holding the gun is particularly good. Nice job.
I love the gun design. Yea Yuki's head looks a bit strange. Try straightening it up a bit. And I think Zero's eyes are a bit too big. Otherwise, this is a great drawing.