So I got my hands on some Vampire Knight manga, and decided to try my hand at one of them. Rima didn't work out, so I did this instead. CnC?
Wow the facial expression looks really good. I like the detail on the eyes and the reflection bit of each eye. I would try to finish off the head of hair. Right now, the back layer of hair looks a little stiff so try to make it flow a little bit better. Also on the left side, under where the hair is blowing over, it looks a little bald there like she has no hair there. Other than that nice job. :3
Really good with the detail and emotion, but try to improve more on proportions. The mouth and eyes could both fit in just one of her eyes, which are a bit too distant from each other. Also, try drawing more of the hair, so it doesn't look like a starfish almost.
The eyes and expression are quite nice, but what bugs me the most is the implied "hairline" of her; it seems as if she is wearing a mask in the instance that her hair does not seem to fit her head entirely as I can see a small part of the head in which it discontinues when it meets a strand of hair. This essentially shows that her head looks a bit incomplete. She also seems to be missing her left ear; although if it is covered by her hair then I suppose that is fine.
