Digital Art First lp liek eva

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Cin, Sep 16, 2007.

  1. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    BAH, CNC OR DIE
     
  2. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    ...The black and blue lines need to go. They dont match the rest of the sig . D:
     
  3. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    The white pixely crap on the left is annoying. Remove it. D:

    Also, I'm not liking how the vector brush cuts off at the bottom.

    EDIT: And at the top, apparently.

    And otherwise, it's pretty unorganized and messy. Work on unity a little more.

    Great job for a first though!
     
  4. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    O_O

    its godly......how do you people make these....
     
  5. Frodis Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Smexy.
    Blue and black lines are trashy. :b
     
  6. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    How is it you all reply to this and not the my sig thread? O.o
     
  7. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    Because the blue (now somehow white) and black lines stood out. And that was what I COULD CnC on. I dont know enough about sigs to post on the other one... >_>
     
  8. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Ew Its Gorgeous <3
     
  9. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Also, I'm wondering where you guys keep getting the "blue lines" from. There's no blue on there, never was.
     
  10. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Holy wow, this is amazing. I don't see anything wrong with it at all. 10/10
     
  11. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    Omg, this rocks.

    That "blue line".

    Cin, you've created an optical illusion.

    I'm setting this as my background for awesome lulz.
     
  12. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Yea seriously, I want to know too. It's bothering me that I don't know what you're all talking about.
     
  13. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Really HB? I'm honored...XD
     
  14. cronoking Chaser

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    It's so smexy D:
    I like how everything is in the middle like it's being sucked in or something >D
    Even though youthinasia isnt a word xD, it's still very easy on the eyes.
    9.9/10 Crono has spoken. ( ´_ゝ`)
     
  15. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Youthinasia's a word...=3

    It's the poisen they use to put animals to sleep...=P

    It was a long were that I just decided to put in...XD;
     
  16. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Time for some tough CnC.

    The whole color flow with the text is good. I mean, imo the japanese style text matches that "light brown" look.

    I'll start from the top of the lp. The text on the top with the lower opacity should look like it has a shadow. Because it seems like it's the type of art that has alot of depth. The part on the bottom of it is pretty good, but black would look nice on it.

    The middle focal has really nice effects. The clouds and the details are very nice. It seems good for a beginner lp though. The "omg" part in the middle looks a little iffy. Should be gone and instead have a different effect. Try blurring some parts dude. It looks like a lp that has used the depth style. And apparently, there's not much depth. Blur the surroundings and sharpen some parts. Make the text a little more visible. It's a bit hard to see. The border is...ok. Take away the whites. Just have the cinematic look on the sides. The black is good, just the left top part has a little emptiness on it, so that should be filled up.

    Overall, hawt for a lp dude.

    Enough cnc right?
     
  17. darkslayer Twilight Town Denizen

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    Not bad.. Pretty good for your frist one.
     
  18. SplitOverload Chaser

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    A CNC please? I mean, it's not helping him. not even boosting his morale.
     
  19. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    Really, Cin.
     
  20. Eclipse Hollow Bastion Committee

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    he did this for me,right cinny?