Feldar's quarrel

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  1. Ashfire45 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    (Open to any and everyone, btw..The first part is just the kinda basic history, but we can make one -awesome- rp if enough people join. ^-^)

    As if having the 'Nobodies' under their thumb wasn't enough, the shadowlings...Heartless played servant to the organisation as well. The heroes- or so the legends said- were most swiftly cast aside by...Well, by the thirteen of them..Sired from death once more, Kingdom Hearts was lost to the evil that overwhelmed them. Sora..Or was it Roxas...He was never -meant- to wield such power, nor to bear the world on his young shoulders. Although...Could the worlds really be saved by Riku, if he was so willingly lead into the darkness by the wtch?

    The cryptic legend had been spewed fourth by some of the more..Charismatic Nobodies quite a few times, withering away any dire hope this city had of being free. The people's hearts had grown weak, the blood-line of skilled key-bladers becoming shallow. "..Sora...Riku...Kairi..." Whispered many in prayer for their beloved deitys, once mighty and swift, to come back and free them from the organisation. How-ever, how could 'Gods' be brought back from the other world if there wasn't a current God to cast his or her aid? The organisation would have them believe that -they- were the Gods of light and shadow...And sadly, some believed,

    some were naively thrown into the state of mind that they were dealing with immortal souls. As if...Their once-grand city had grown corrupt, the Nobodies and shadow-servants causing the city to succumb to pityful ruins. How-ever, the strong and lucky survived...Ash Sparrow being the latter.

    5'0" Sparrow's parents and disturbed brother had been..Converted to the Nobodies, as an alarming number of people had found ways of dealing with them; segments of key-blades had been formed together into weapons, even some into the desired 'Gun-blades', and so their numbers decreased rapidly. Until pyro Axel was sent to the home of the inventors of such things....Jacob and Aleesha Sparrow- even their son- fought determindly to defend their youngest from the Organisation member, although all of them perished in flames...Well, albeit Ash. Axel had been known for being a...Kinder Nobody, and so the thought of this two-year-old's blood spillt on his behalf..It wouldn't be allowed. The fifteen year old sadly all too much of her family's death; something that mentally scarred her to this very day...Which, in turn, caused an extreme fear of fire.

    But still, the writer of this rambles; our tale begins here.

    The unattractively scrawny lass sprinted through the rubble, bare-feet clashing irritabley against the hard ground. "Crap, crap, crap..." The almost comical voice's accent was..Odd, to say the least; something that sounded very akin to a New Jersey accent. Now, a good four or five segments of -a- key-blade, she couldn't quite tell which, had (apparently) been found by some cluelessly meandering Heartless...If she could get her hands on them, Sparrow could use her father's blue-prints to make her own key-blade! Something she'd..Badly need if she wanted to survive. The girl's goggles, resting upon her forehead, glinted the firey reflection of the above sun, the young woman wearing a black, sleeveless shirt with baggy trousers...Right,

    If any other volunteers came her way, looking for the segments...She had seen -nothing-! But..Perhaps it'd be usefull to have a few helping hands in this search..The restoration commitee were always getting in her way, taking segments off her for a 'better cause'...But not today! Ash could feel it in her weak bone that this would go -smoothly-. Unique, large eyes of mischievous aquatic furiously scanned the path way she was legging it along, suspicious incase any of the shadowlings came by...Then that'd mean the nobodies were lingering, and she'd have to go to yet -another- segment of the ruined city to find these damnable segments. Dark-brown, shoulder-length hair was casually flickered away from a heart-shaped, childish face as she ran, determined and yet...Oh so frightened...
     
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    Ummm...sorry but can I join? Yes I know...I'm supposed to tell you my character...but here are my excuses:
    1. Using psp to post right now...really hard to type that much...and it has limited text space...
    2. Since there isn't an OC form thingy...(name, age, weapon, history etc.) do I introduce my character the same way as you introduced yours?
    Yeah...sorry if it sounded rude(I bet it doesn't)...so...ummm...yeah...
    EDIT: Oh well...might as well put something...I've tried waiting for you but yeah...you take too long...so here it goes. I'll do it the same way you did...

    Alaric had gotten another assignment from the restoration commitee and was running to get another segment. "I should make them pay me more...oh well at least the actually do pay me." He said in a dark tone.
    Alaric had been hired by the commitee and wasn't a volunteer. He didn't go around asking for segments and waiting to hear about them. He went out and found them. His parents died a few years back and left him everything in their will. The only problem was...he couldn't get anything because he had to go somewhere else to get his inheritance. It costs a lot of money just to get there so he decided to work for the commitee by collecting segments.
    "This collecting can get boring...I wish I had something else to do. Maybe if a few nobodies were around it would be interesting." He said laughing to himself jumping off of a rooftop with his black hair getting in his brown eyes when he jumped. "Damn it. I need to cut my hair already. It's almost at my shoulders." Alaric faced a tall structure. I need a better view of my surroundings...climbing this would help... At 6'0" he easily grabbed on to a high part of the structure and quickly started climbing it. He looked down from the top seeing a girl with goggles running. Weird...I thought I was the only one here. He decided climbing back down but apparently the structure didn't agree with his weight and the top half of it snapped off. "Damn it!" He shouted as he fell to the ground. He landed with a loud thud causing the dirt to scatter around where he lay. He looked at his white shirt which was covered in dirt...the same went for his black pants and boots. Not again...and I think I broke something too...

    Yeah....sooo...how's that? Sorry if it was lame and/or poorly written...


    EDIT: 6/4/08- You still around? You haven't answered in 2 days...bad connection or homework? Or grounded?
     
  3. Ashfire45 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ((Awesomely wrote. :D Jeez, gonna have to get the creativity going if I wanna match you. >-< But again, thanks loads for joining and the restoration commitee are all yours to develope. ^-^

    Note to others: Characters can be taken from the game, i.e) Organisation characters, even some nobodies if you want. ^-^ Or..You can just create your own character and shove 'em into the organisation or what-ever. :p S'all good.))

    Now, the coy complaint's of wage..Or the lack of wage..Didn't catch her attention. The furious pounding of feet upon the ground merely caused an eyebrow to arch. Although she didn't think for a -second- that some tallish, Raven-haired lad would be here- trying to collect her precious segments! And from the Restoration Commitee, no less...A hired goon! She'd have to be utterly deaf or worryingly absent-minded to not notice a building collapsing..Though it did happen. Either a large quantity of the Nobodies, or even just an overly large Heartless would clumsily pioneer through out the top of the unattended buildings, then BOOM! They're squished due to their own stupidity. "The hell..." She surreptitously mumbled, head apprehensively tilted to the side as she bravely (or idiotically, take your pick) approached the building.

    A few blinks of confusion at the male- along with a long, awkward pause of thought. "...Well, well, well! Ain't you the biggest Nobody I've ever seen!? Not a heartless I-...I get it!" She squeaked determindly, petitely clenched fist slamming against her palm with a sudden thought. "...You're one of -them-! The organisation! Well, boyo! I'll give you a five minute head-start...Cause I know you're gonna try'n skedaddle."
     
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    OOC: ...You write too good for your own good(lol it rhymed)...my writing skills are not even near your level of awesomeness...I'm jealous now*becomes emo* ok I'll never go emo...
    BIC: Alaric got up and looked at the girl who had just spoken to him. "What are you...talking about? All I'm here to do is get those stupid segments and sell them off to the restoration commitee." He answered her in a confused way. He tilted his head and looked at the building he had just wrecked. "Oh great...hopefully that doesn't count off on my reward." This isn't going well...might as well ask about the segment and get this over quickly. "Listen I'm in a bit of a rush here. I don't care what the commitee is trying to do I just need the money. So do you have the segment or even know where it is? I'm not going anywhere until you give me an answer." He said brushing the hair out of his face.
     
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    Sparrow's heart simply sank. Even -worse-! The boy was...One of the restoration commitee. Large eyes stared thouhtfully towards him, raising her free hand to cup her chin gently in a considering manner. "...Oh, God, you're one of the Restoration Commitee, right...? Oi vay.." Her palm slapped disappointedly against her forehead, a shuddering moan of severe irritation following. Right..Surely he was a reasonable man? Someone who could understand the importance of this mission...?...Probably not, but it was worth-while trying to persuade him anyhows. Or just plainly lie to him. "...Listen, buddy, pal, friend of mine..Comrade." She continued chirping, a sweet smile spreading pleasantly on her childish features. "...I...I'm kinda lookin' for those...Segments, myself. Although...Only trouble is the damn Nobodies got to them before me."...Ah. Persuasion mixed with blatant lying. Genius.

    "...Sooo, maybe you should...Move on, mm? I won't tell the Restoration Commitee if you won't.." A cheerful wink as her slender arms crossed, cheerfull only because of the possibility that she could possibly decrease their chance of succession...
     
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    Alaric brushed off some dirt from his shoulder feeling a bit stupid that he had misjudged the strength of the building. "I don't get paid enough to do this..." He said under his breath. He looked back at the girl getting annoyed that she thought he was a complete idiot. "It's obvious you're lying. I don't actually like the commitee I'm just trying to use the money to go somewhere important. Either help me or not, but I willl get that segment." He tried taking a step forward but almost lost his balance. Oh great...I broke my leg. I'm lucky that I heal fast... He stared at the girl for a moment thinking of reasons why she would be out here and why she would lie to him. He finally had an idea of what was going on. "You're trying to make a keyblade aren't you?" He said smiling already knowing how he could get what he wanted quickly. "I can help with that. You just need to help me first. Don't even try to trick me. I'm not some idiot that just collects money."
     
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    "Sure fooled me.." A spitefull mummer as her lies were basically torn apart...Gah! Another thing about the damnable restoration Commitee members was their eery ability to weed out her lies from the truth. Ah, well..Perhaps they weren't -that- bad. Just trying to do the right thing; sadly, innocents always seemed to got in the way and were dealt with swiftly. Her head bowed shamefacedly, brow furrowing in thought. What if he took the segments all for himself, and left her with naught but an exhausted mind? A hellfire glare as she stared at him, fists simply curling with controlled rage. How -dare- he...Then again, he obviously was meaning for business and not kidding around.

    The sweet smile forcing its way back, Sparrow's head bobbed from side to side in thought...When a sudden hissy-fit of the century was taken, one foot stamping wildly on the ground as she spoke. Or more yelled, to be precise. "Ooooo! That's not -fair-! I don't even need your help, and you'll just leave me in the dust anyhows when ya get the segments! You, sir, are a shmuck if there ever was one!"
     
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    He continued to smile. She really thinks I can't be trusted...that really is just sad. "Hey I'm different from the rest of the commitee. They take advantage of the fact I'm a bit desperate. They know how much money I need and decide to pay me almost nothing for these stupid jobs!" He already could tell that the girl probably might not help him unless he did something to gain her trust first. I hate being nice... "As soon as I get the money I can steal back the segments and give them to you. How does that work for you, girl?" He didn't want to cheat the girl she did seem pretty desperate herself. Plus, even though people made fun of him for it, he was a bit of a gentleman and didn't mess with girls.
    OOC: yeah...sorry for not being able to type much compared to your awesome writing...but then again...I was never the best writer :p
     
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    ((Pfft...Go with the flow, hun. xD S'all good))

    ..."Y'mean it..?" The girl sheepishly questioned, slender fingers prodding nervously together. These shards were difficult things to find..And even if he -did- attempt to steal them back, what would happen if the lad failed? Well, she'd be severly irritated then...And hunting down the organisation would be -sooo- much more harder with-out a gunblade..Or even key-blade, for that matter. Ash almost blankly stared at him, rigid and silent for a few moments. She didn't know him- he could have been under their thumb..Then again, he said he needed money and they weren't supplying him with the right amount. Well, if -she- had money she could twist him away from the horrible Comitee, perhaps even gain an..Aquaintance in this fight. As doing it herself seemed..Well, impossible.

    "...Fine. Although if I see the wrong spark in ya eye, ya fingers twitch...You're a dead man, y'hear me?"
     
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    At this he had to hold back a laugh. That girl wouldn't be able to beat him even with a keyblade or gunblade. After a moment of quiet laughing he wondered why he would help her when it would be easy just to take advantage of the situation. Maybe he was just feeling nice. "Okay I won't betray you. Maybe after I get you those segments I could stick around." He said. "So why is a young girl like you trying to make a keyblade? To protect yourself or avenge a loved one?"
    OOC: eating=typing less and slower..rawr
     
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    "I'm gonna take down the organisation! That's what this city needs, it doesn't need a lotta idiots makin' donations and sendin' out useless lil' errand boys..It needs heroes like me to go'n...Well...Get rid of 'em...Although I have to say- I'm really lookin' for one member..Umm...Red hair..green eyes..Revenge, I guess.." She went mournfully quiet for once, extremely up-set by the memory of what she would hopefully find out to be Axel. Ash's fists slowly, reluctantly uncurled, the girl taking a deep sigh..More to relax than to display irritation at such a thing. "Although everybody laughs at me when I say that..Dunno why, it's possible! Right..As long as ya believe...But anyhow,

    What's your dealio?"
     
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    He just had to hold in another laugh. That girl trying to be a hero? Now that's funny...although it's strange that she actually means it. "Aren't you a little immature to be doing this? Oh well beggars can't be choosers." He said still holding back his laughter. It was funny that a girl that couldn't be older than 16 would even bother with something like this. "I think I know who you're talking about though...that's Axel right? It can be a pain just fighting him...and that attitude." He had fought some of the organization members before. He never could beat any of them. How could he if all he had was whatever weapon he could find and just whatever skill he had? He didn't have any powers like them.
    "Want to know what I'm trying to do? Well...after my parents died I inherited everything they had. Apparently the important stuff is kept somewhere far away. I just need the money to get over there. Who knows maybe I inherited a keyblade." He laughed this time. The thought of inheriting something like that was so unlikely that it just made him laugh.
     
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    Her eyebrow twitched. Madly. This being the first sign that yet another tauntrom would be thrown at him. Sub-consciously pouting, her scrawy arms intertwined together against her chest, eyes squinting ever so slightly towards him. "Age don't matter! I'm wise enough, strong enough, tough enough...Infact, I'm just the right person to do this j-Axel? That's his name..?...Good, I know what to put on his grave." An overly egotistical chuckle as she wolfishly grinned at him, something that spread sadistically from ear to ear. So he had been usefull after all...Axel. Should be easy to remember.

    "D'aw, really..? That's horrible..And they're too selfish to give ya money...Jeez, all they do is get in the way, don't they..."
     
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    Alaric was beginning to get annoyed. It had been awhile since anyone had made him angry. He decided not to show his anger though and remained calm. This girl is getting annoying...she can't beat Axel. She'll just get herself killed. Oh great...that means I'll have to help her even more. Why do I have to be the good guy? "Well...this looks like it'll be an interesting journey. Hey I never did get your name. I've been a bit rude...my name is Alaric." He said feeling his hand twitch. This is going to be one of my worse adventures...at least I'm not alone...but still..that girl should at least try to be nice. I am helping her after all.
     
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    Yes, young Sparrow had a..Amazing talent for infuriating people with-out actually guessing it. A lack of manners also contributed to such a thing...Then again, Sparrow's social developement had been stunted some-what; the young woman treating everybody with paranoid suspicion. Well, it seemed to get her along so far...Ash blinked some-what towards him, eyebrow slightly raised at the twitching of his hand which made her flinch, a sudden expression of fear comanding her features..If only momentarily. "Ash Sparrow...Well, Alaric..I ain't good with dealin' with the Comitee chumps, so..I'd be lyin' if I said it was nice to meetcha."
     
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    "Well...I can deal with that, but I'm not lying when I say nice to meet you." At first he didn't really mean it. Ash had been getting on his nerves but she did have good reason to distrust him. It wasn't the first time when he had met someone that didn't like him. After a moment of thinking he figured that it was better traveling with someone else even if it did mean that he had to deal with the dislike and lack of trust in him. He noticed her reaction to when his hand twitched and just ignored it. "Where to? I don't really have much of an idea where that segment is so I guess you'll lead the way...unless you have it with you already." As he said it a thought ran through his mind. Maybe...no nevermind...that would never happen...stupid mind playing tricks on me.
     
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    Eh, well..She hadn't been slapped, punched, kicked or beaten as of yet..So that was a very good sign. Even if any sudden movements of his hands would make her flinch- she still became...Some-what relaxed. Albeit, not the perfect comrade she had in mind..He was tall, and seemed to know a thing or two about the world about him. Sparrow blinked somewhat towards him, shoulders slouched as her paranoid gaze flickered towards his feet..Her own being bare. Hell, shoes were difficult things to find for cheap...Her back straightened, the lazily down shoulders went up ever so slightly, and the young woman gave a determined nod.

    It would be quite a while of travelling, of her taking sharp rights and left, and giving him suspicious glances over her shoulder before they remained at the square of where the segments were. Sparrow halted in her tracks, seeing the delightful ruins of yet another chunk of the city. To think that this was once so...Populated made her chuckle quietly, regretfully. "...Right, I'm pretty -damn- sure it'll be beneath the rubble of...The building to our left. Guess we'd better get to work..."
     
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    He didn't like the fact that she had been glancing over at him as if he was going to turn on her any moment. Still...it was better than nothing. At least she didn't bother him. When they reached the area he just took a moment to look around. "Why does it feel like we're just waiting to get attacked? I thought I would be used to the feeling by now." He commented still scanning the area wondering if anyone else had followed. He then looked at the pile of rubble next to the building. "Good thing this one isn't guarded by anything...I don't even have my sword with me." He walked over to the pile and just stared at it for a moment. Nothing like a good 'ol day's worth of manual labor to get the blood going.
     
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    ...He...Wasn't armed? Those deluded idiots didn't even -equip- their lads before sending them out to the field? Ash's jaw almost dropped to the ground, eyebrow twitching..."Don't worry, I'll protect you.." The girl mockingly cooed, a sudden change of expression...Although there was still that small tinge of infuriation upon her features, Sparrow managed a jestfull smile. Mainly in amusement to what his reaction would be.."..After all, first road to becomin' a hero'll be to protect the helpless, I guess..." Ash's head tilted up suddenly in pride, the girl's chesire-cat grin soon falling as the two would get to the..Well, nitty-gritty of finding this damnable thing. Although they would find it, she could feel it in her bones that her ticket to becoming a famous hero would be right here...Of course, she had to -work- for it, but it'd be...So worth it...
     
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    He glared at her for a minute and held back from insulting her. He then found a simple way to get back at her. Knowing her attitude this would be to easy. "You're cute." He simply said as he tossed a rock out of his way trying to dig for the segment already knowing how she would react. Well maybe now she'll leave me alone. I would rather not waste my time on silly insults. Now maybe I can concentrate on thinking of how to break in and steal the other segments...
     
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