Familiar Face- A poem

I'm not sure if you'll like it, but i decided to post it any way. Here it goes:

Familiar face
Starlight wish,
Where are you?
Are you there?
I hear your voice
I feel you there
Illusionate presence
Taunts me.

Familiar friend
Twilight hope,
I’m searching for you.
I’m hoping you’re there.
It’s been so long
Friend, my friend.
I’m wishing for you
To see me now.

Familiar uncertainty
Midnight despair
I wish you were here,
To be here with me.
So many years
Have passed us by
I don’t want to forget
Your face, your heart.

Familiar illusion
Sunset dream
Are you real?

Please, be real.

I hope you like it. Critisisim is always welcome! I hope you ppl will take my poem more seriously than my friends do...:(

I guess no one likes it... :(

 

That was great. I really enjoyed it. Please post more of your poetry.

 

If I didn't read it, I must have not seen it. XD;

Anyways, I love it! =3

I loved the flow, and, also, I kinda know where it's coming from, so it makes it that much more special! =3

You go, gurl! XD

 

Thanks! :D It's about a friend of mine that I haven't seen in a long time. *sigh* I really miss him...

 

More Poems Please!!!!!!!!

 

I like your poem! Post more please :)