Fallen Angel (title is a work in progress)

This is a story I just recently started working on. This is what will be the prolouge as soon as I finish. Chances are I will go back and change it up some once I get more into my writing. But I hope you enjoy reading it. Please let me know what you think about it.
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He turned sharply narrowly dodging the ball of darkness shot at him from below. He tucked his wings to gain speed as he dived at his enemy. His foe shot another ball of darkness at him but he again dodged it. He flew by the demon with such speed that the demon didn’t even notice he had passed by before it fell into two separate pieces.
The warrior flew back into the sky with the demon’s blood still fresh on his blade. As his gaze turned to the aerial battle going on above him he saw his friend fall to the ground, wings ripped from his back.
“Blitz!†the warrior screamed as his friend slammed into the ground lifeless. He turned back to the battle above him and scanned the skies for his friends’ killer. He saw the killer high above him.
The demon held his friends’ wings in his claws as he relished in his victory over yet another angel warrior. It dropped the wings and lashed out at the nearest angel, slashing it across the chest with its’ mighty claws. The angel lost grip of its sword and fell as her blood and entrails shot from her fatal wounds.
“SAPPHIRE!!!!†the warrior screamed as his beloved fell from the sky. In the last 30 seconds he had lost his closet friend and his dearest love. As he climbed in the sky towards his lovers’ murderer he was attacked by another demon whom he quickly dispatched with a quick stab of his sword. The demon fell with his sword still in it. He looked around for a weapon when he spotted his beloveds’ weapon falling through the sky.
He flew to the blade and grabbed it in his hands before climbing back to meet the demon. He attacked the demon with all his strength and anger as he thought of his love and his best friend dying to protect their homes.
He slashed the demon in the back causing it to roar in pain as it turned to face its’ attacker. It snarled in disgust at the angelic warrior floating in, what it deemed, its’ air space. The demon clawed at the warrior attempting to take his head off. The warrior ducked and made a quick thrust at the demon’s throat. The demon twisted to the side and back handed the warrior knocking the air out of his lungs. As the warrior gasped for breath, the demon went for the kill. He pulled his arm back and went for the warrior’s throat. The warrior recovered just in time to drop just enough to dodge the attack, losing only some feathers in the process. The demon took the advantage of being above his opponent and dropped onto the warrior causing them both to plummet to the ground below.
The two trashed about in the air attempting to gain the upper hand before hitting the ground. They crashed into the ground causing and large shockwave to be sent out from the area which caused the angels and demons fighting around them to be shaken up. All around them angels and demons attacked each other ferociously. Slashing and clawing throats and chests. The ground was littered with the bodies of hundreds of angels and thousands of demons.
The demon stood up and roared as it charged the warrior. The warrior rolled between its’ legs hopped up and spun, slicing into the demons shadowy wings. The demon roared with pain as one of its’ wings was sliced open. It reached back and ripped its own destroyed wing off. It stared at the torn appendage with a look of pain on its face. It turned to the warrior only to receive a quick kick in the face, causing it to stumble back. It roared in frustration at the warrior as it rushed forward punching the warrior and knocking him flying back and into the ground.
“You will pay for taking my wing. I will rip your heart out and feast on your flesh you impudent angel!†growled the angered demon.
“I will run you through you foul beast! You killed my friend, and took the woman I love from me. I will make you pay!†the angel shouted back.
The two rushed at each other. The angel with his sword ready to take the head of his foe, and the demon with his claws ready to tear the flesh and bones of the angelic warrior before him.
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I realize it's a little short but like I said chances are I will be editing it at a later date.

 

Hmmm...Interesting.