Digital Art Fading Away

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Bou, Aug 23, 2007.

  1. Bou Banned

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    My first ever signature. Constructive CnC would be nice.

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  2. The Great Gatz Chaser

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    WOO! That's cool. Better than I could do. But then again I fail hard like this:

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    btw I fail not you​
     
  3. Tootsie coquí

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    It's okay
    I dig simple signatures
    Love the colors but you need a liiittle work with the text.
    But still good.
     
  4. Moodkip ~洞爺湖~

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    What program are you using? I can help you a great deal if it's Photoshop or Paintshop Pro, but if it's GIMP, I can't really help you. xD

    Anyways, I'll start with what I can do until you answer. xD
    First off, I like the text placing, but someone else might argue with that (I'm not too great with text). Second, most of the time you want the main focus to fit into the frame a little better, in this sig, you have the render/stock a little too big for the size of the sig. Overall, way better than my first sig.
     
  5. Bou Banned

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    I am using Photoshop.
     
  6. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    It's very impressive for a first. Despite being plain, the color looks very appealing.

    The things I'd work on are text and effects (keeping them organized) mostly. The text should always be somewhere near the render. It makes it appeal a lot more to the viewer.

    The effects department can easily be created by filters, C4D's, or any brushes you may have downloaded.

    Stock placement overall isn't bad either. But for future reference I'd try and placing so the body is apparent. In this piece here you don't need to do that sinec there are clearly arms coming out of her shoulders. But if you were to have a stock where the arms would not be visible unless shrinking the size, do so. However, only the point where the collar bone/upper chest/shoulders are noticeable. This makes things easier. And it gets rid of the "floating head" syndrome.

    Nice job. Keep up the work!
     
  7. Bou Banned

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    Thanks, Darkwatch. Is it alright if I add you on MSN? There's something I need you to ask you about.
     
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    I'm good for some questions too if you want. But DW usually got a hang on most of them xD

    Try to add more of a design. For the first, it's decent. The colors and everything. The text isn't half bad as well, with the blur. Try to get some brushes, patterns, and fonts. Try to use a gradient and have a light source. With those, it'll be perfect.
     
  10. Cody Chaser

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    Pretty plain.
    Apply image(Control+Alt+Shift+E) And run one of the ripple filters, erase over the render/stock(Your picture) and make the light brighter. That would make it a little more interesting.