It's quite a shock that this is from night time xD I love it, but I do think it may be a bit too bright, I feel a bit blinded by it. I love your choice of text and the effects you've used to bring out these colours I just can't see the guy very clearly. However, good piece, keep it up.
woah i like it!! the texture you used is so cool it looks like the paper has been burned or charred a bit by the light leak. the brightness reminds me of the movie sunshine at the very end where the light is so intense that cappa's face and body is all lit up. good job jerome! :3
I think your negatives got over exposed bro. Nah I like it, just a bit too bright for me, i get what you're going for, but toning it done just a tad would probably make it look nicer over all.