Okay so basically I'm trying to make Etrius more complex then he should be, (At least, that's how I feel) and it's hard to keep the lock on certain things when it take a little long to go through it, if you're following me. What I'm trying to say is, I think Etrius is a bit of a shaky character on my part, and I'm asking your opinion. Do you think he's a bit much? Or is he fine the way he is?
He is a good character; but you bring out too much of him at once. He has got lots of backstory and he needs a bit more gradual progression as a character. Other than the fact that you need to take it slower. I say he is mostly fine.
