ello evry1! im releasing part of a new story out to the pplz ov the public. its only a prologue The Eternally Lost Memory It has been two years sicne the events at Oblivion Castle. The castle has since then become quiet. Until now. "Marluxia." A dark voice calls through the castle. "Did you recover the memory?" Marluxia walks out from the shadow. "Yes. Kid did put up quite a fight. But what memory is this?" "The card you hold in your hand. It is Sora's memory of the Light. Without the Light, Sora will lose all will, and revert back to the form of a Heartless." Marluxia handed the card into the Darkness. Meanwhile on Destiny Islands, Sora was sleeping on the shore. Suddenly he woke up and felt an excusiating pain in his chest. "What's going on? What's happening to my heart?" he asked himself. Sora fell to his knees and grabbed his heart. "RIKU! KAIRI! ROXAS! ANYONE!" he called. He began to notice darkness closing in on him. It crawled up his body and soon it consumed him. Riku rushed to the scene just as Roxas appeared. "SORA!" Riku shouted. He summoned The Way to the Dawn. Sora stared at Riku for a long time. Then he ran toward him and began to attack. Riku blocked the attacks, afraid to hurt his friend. Roxas then summoned the Oathkeeper and Oblivion and stood beside Riku. "Sora, stop. I don't want to hurt you!" Roxas called. But it was no use. Sora continued attacking at both of them. "Sorry to do this Sora, but I have no choice," Roxas said. He kicked Sora back. "Riku you have to find the source of this darkness. I'll keep Sora occupied." "But-" "JUST GO!" Roxas shouted. well this is the prologue. more of this will release over the next week.
thanx. i probly wil ovr the nxt few days. i rlly wnt 2 add Lexaues and mab Axel. i also wnt to add Roxas as one of the heros.
Err...I suppose it is good, but you really need much more than a few sentences to get a real prologue and story. Try writing a little more, becuase even a prologue should be a little longer than that.
