Escape

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Tora-chan, May 26, 2008.

  1. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    I don't consider myself a great poet but i have a few things that i wrote..might as well post them every once in awhile, constructive critizism is welcomed.
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    Sometiems I wish I could just escape
    To the farthest corners from the world
    That never gives but always takes.
    Now everything that I cared for
    Walked on out and shut the door
    And what's left is drivin' me crazy
    So is there a way you can help me
    Or just let me escape...?​
     
  2. Sumi suicidé

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    nice! i like it!