]i wrote this a little while ago ENDLESS ABYSS as the darkness began to clear darkness lingered and thrived when the sky began to uncloud black figures entered my mind. As i reached the tallest peak I fell into an endless abyss While in the light, i could fly i went so high i found heven the song set my free when the darkness came i fell from my post it devoured my soul.
It's okay, weak imagery if I must say so. The first verse had great rhythm, but the last two were a bit...not so much. Good job though.
